here's some bullshit im goin to keystyle right quick, tell me what ya'll think

here it goes....

yo, now check this whoadie, we be settin up floatie, lookin back, holla back, sayin whatz up zack
let me holla at ya peeps, you in too deep, everything you let me borrow dog i wanna keep
its like i'm a theif dog, rollin back in the fog, like it's very light and i got nothin to hold
all the money i see you know i be gettin, so just follow me dog and keep on steppin...

beep-beep, rollin back down the streetz, tryin to get everybody who i wanna seek
it's like im trippin dog, im so confused, lookin back at the times i got abused
times was hard but i thought it through, when it all came back to me i finally knew
what about you, you knew who i was, we met every mornin to catch the bus
it's like ol' dirty rust, somebody, nobody, who i could never trust
i threw the bone, he kept on fetchin, but i feel ya dog, i'll keep on steppin....

check it out...1 year i'll be 18, got a new friend named stephan hakeem
we be rockin the ice, rollin the dice, next 3 years we aint gon be nothin nice
17 and im still the same, now i'm ridin through the hood and got so much game
see some girls and they kinda fly, won't give em a chance and they wanna ask why
all the promises you made you know i had to kept, so why ask why, just take a few steps...!!!

thats just a quick written song, i guess you can call it that!!!!

Was Ok... Didnt Reall Feel The Topic Or Anything...

Try Working On It For A Day Or Two... And Don't Key It Up