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Old 07-11-03, 03:25 PM   #1
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Cool Medicine Man

IP: C1DA C961

i'm the sweet elixer doctor
call me the penicillin villan, got shit that'll rock ya
intoxi-cock ya back throw your life off track
cook the smack and store it on my rack
shelf life neva expires, got whatever cravings u desire
i love when a junky feels inspired
comes to me lookin tired, shakin, feenin, he's wired
i slip him some more life and he breathes in relief
i'm a killa and a thief
drink a lil liquor, smoke on the reef
but you want the hard shit tell me precisely what you need
and i'll give you relief
i'll be your doctor toxic
find me in 201
i'll give you the 420, haze or dro
wit a lil bit of that C-O C-A
lose all your trouble today
no start up fee the first sniff is free
better pay attention though, the last of this is key

from here on out i own your life
your money is now mine cause the doctors always right....
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Old 07-12-03, 09:30 AM   #2
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Not bad man.... i liked this... good subject, some nice imagery... good structure it a little better to keep the flow smooth.... but overall it was good.... peace doggy
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