a Verse i Recorded for Audio .. kinda old, but eh


Life is hard, filled with so much fight and war
its not all about money,girls, and driving cars
if you were human, maybe you could loosen
Speak and do it, but your too scared of lookin stupid
Till you got someone, who has somethin you lack
They love you, but you just stab them in the back
Now your on the streets, sayin "help me man"
But no ones there to offer you a helping hand
You trapped yourself in a cell, its hard to see
But you did it to yourself, even swallowed the key
Now your stuck in life, with no where to go
Evil feedin off the innocence thats grows in your soul
its all the same, its wierd how we talk this way
Screamin for help, cause your still there locked away
Now someone comes, in the hault of faith
its the person you betrayed, now they walk away

i feel so lost in this world of sorrow and pain
Drowning in my tears, and flooded with rain
This shit can make you sick in so many ways
it goes from hate to love, till you love to hate

Dopeness.
Flow was pretty good, multi's helped with that, nice internals and externals, hook was a nice touch, nice take on the topic,

Its gankstah, naggah!

Thanx .. ^

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Sleep On This And I Shall Have You Banned, Sluts.

Recognise : )

^lmao
nah this was a nice drop
liked the flow and the style of the way it was done
nice word play as well

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=66485
give me some feedback yo
anyway this is tight verse nice flow and dope word-play good shit