Ayo i never used guns i used my mic as a weapon
killed rivals smoked survivals like i do in tekken
dont take me serious thats how u get baked
ill leave u more shook then a dead person in da middle of a earth quake
u can talk hard doesnt mean that u really is ill bust ya lips
the 4'5 will pun ketch-up on ya ribs
ya like get taken u dont know how 2 act guns with feens with crack i will eat u like a cold up snack
shells in ya back in fact u cant win testing da best 2 drop see no cat can tope me with more punches then rocky
enough is not enough tell its nothin left catch holes in ya chest ur like da grim repper always getting put 2 rest
im steady always droppin bombs
print ya album on a pillow cause ya raps get sleped on
yeah u fucking around thats how ya crew gets steped on
blow holes in ya weapons yall vinal but ya body is tethlon
i'm hardkore man like catus jack I dont die
u blue berry cake niggaz take a piece of ya pit
dont let shit slide like jay-z comes with more songs to cry
u anit coming up unless your harret the spy

uppin

this was pretty lame...usually i go through the general ground rules for open mics with newbs but im too lazy so ill say this...dont ever rap about being a gangster again, up your vocab, and mutlis

nice 4 a new-b

look at yo record u should be da last nigga to say somethin bout someones rhyme

word up 9 millimeter keep ya fuckin cock lovin mouth shut A2Z ya fat fuck

hahahaha

nice drop

^thanks kid

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stop trying too be gangsta....That shit was Lame...U gotta elevate ur vocab and wordplay , and also ur metaphors..........I give u a 5/10

^ whateva u say lil girl..uppin 4 more feedback

LOL@ Lil girl..........If u can't take feedback , then u never gon get better cuzzn..........

i guees u right..nah..anyway uppin!

Now do you fucking believe...as too my record...i only battle vets you fucker, meaning i only accept some kind of CHALLENGE! not just punk ass new-bs, and yes i could breat your even if i was typing with my dick and thew backspace kkey was gone...and maybe you dont know me...im elite muthafucka...peep any open mic, be my guest...*sniff sniff* is that a beef i smell?