you want anyhing in this fukin world you gotta make it happen.../
every1z born to do summin get off yah ASS stop relaxen.../
i see people on the corner with bubbly lettin there life disapear../
i never realized wut mom said bout this topic but now its clear../
dat we all here for a reason SO why do people stop breathin../
they scared to make shit happen crouds get em weazen.../
50 cent came from nothin but look at the guy now.../
becuase he had a son he put the guns fr war down/
kids turn into men an woman so why do we keep sinnin?../
im sick an tired of unrealilistic dreams an people pretendon../
make sommen happen my parents split yesterday i aint given up./
im'a stand tough make summin happen an grow up.../


Things happen for a reason why die now?...
put the knife down look at yah life u can turn it around....
dont end up goin 6 feet into ground...

corrupted minds in our own given aira 1 year an 6 months theres been 6 deaths/
those were suicides all in my family how can i handle this i juz make it happen get out the mess.../
i write to get emotions out an try an give people a sence of bein/
fuk it the only people gunna listen to me is if i start screamen../
luck strikes out people crash you gotta have a back up plan/
heard from the block u gotta undastand life befo u become a man/
i got the game fucked up i alwez thought it was to give eachother satisfaction/
to get you an your peeps makin dough with no life subtractions

Things happen for a reason why die now?...
put the knife down look at yah life u can turn it around....
dont end up goin 6 feet into ground...

put the knife down kid no1 gunna kill you but yourself/
people wonna stop there health cuz the cards they been delt/
even tubby ass reida micneal maken life work well.../
now if she can do it we can all get out'a hell an stay out'a jail../
critique ya work until its unique an hasnt been done before../
show the world wuts happenin wuts soon to be in stores../
suicides no more get out the struggle an make sum happen../
in the end it may be hard but ya'all be laughen.../

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

just bored..an i havent wrote anythnig for a while so yah theres a drop for yagh tell me wut yah think an if anybody wonna calab lemme no ive never done a calab an i wonna try it

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

VERY TIGHT ISH YO I FELT IT FROM THE GATE TO THE END YOU HIT ME UP SOMETIME

good shit for a newbie

thanks word perfect an 9 i'll check your guys stuff later peace an thanks for positive input no joke peace

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461