Makin dis shit for da rap legends mix tape. Im likin what I got so far .... its not through yet.

Other Life of Mine

G34= Holding the subsisded information , a death ereased from the mind , with five thousand other thoughts of mine/
Lyrically im fine a re-incarnation , cant wait for this games radical change , when I bust on the sceene niggas shall drop their cocaine/
Bowdown before me , im a young and lyrically crazed , just waitin to be pushed into the spotlight and handed my fame/
Where were the bullets when they were supposed fly , nothing went bye , no souls were corroded unless you count I/
A virgins blood, this is what im about , an impact on the world a controlled sword , could cause the death of many all the shame in one city/
The innocent die , but the convicted continue to ride , a mislead re-written page in time , ive misused my eyes and sometimes this life of mine/
Whos time is up , 5 lives can be taken when no ones their to watch em grow up , applying for shit asking where should I show up/
Lifed doused in hinekan , drop the beer and keep on signin in , confused mathmatically and this other life of mine......./

When you thought I was finished ,
I came back with a mind that wouldnt quit
When you thought I was finished ,
I went back my flames once again lit
When you thought I was finished ,
My lyrics became stronger emdembed in your mind much longer

G34= Writing the opositions posstions , redirecting your mind set in on the right course , but still keepin the street source/
When soldiers dont make it back , enemys gawked at shot down with 1 cap , bloodflow slow as frozen tree sap/
Try stoppin , but it seems like your strapped down , your mind has quit but your hand still makin the sound of that glot firing the rounds/
Needing affirmitive action , im controlling the caption writting my own words and reversing the other emcees actions/
Sit down and listen to the words , it may be your story thats told , but honestly no ones still bold/
Born dsyfunctional , my words take the aciton as if their presidential , my partnas are never illused/
Seems like my words confuse , seems as if all morals have been intrused , talent mollicules have been re-fused/
Respect , has been put to shame a hard workin man has been put away and personality erased/
They only care when the cops die , no ones givin a damn when an innocent is down and crys/
The funnerals only the beggining , revenge is on the evening , re-actions planned and several niggas with guns at hands/
Its a right-to-bear-arms when were pulling the alarm , shoot when they come out while the reast run around and shout/



When you thought I was finished ,
I came back with a mind that wouldnt quit
When you thought I was finished ,
I went back my flames once again lit
When you thought I was finished ,
My lyrics became stronger emdembed in your mind much longer

nice wordplay but u need 2 work on multies and shit like that 2 finish the flow and make it tight, but this is good shit...

word nice concept i liked your flow would have been better with mutlies nice vocab and wordplay keep doin you

Nice word play and decent flow..but like tha otha 2 cats said u need mo' multies kid

multies would help.. the concept was good and tha wordplay
was str8.. good shit dawg.. stay up - 0 n e

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