[Talking] Let me get serious on ya for a second….gotta get this shit off ma chest

[Verse 1]
Sorry, I really hate to be so sentimental//
How are instrumentals fucking kids mental//
When Im expressing myself, how is that so detrimental//
How does that hurt society, makes kids into the devil//
Everyone doubting me as I scrape this paper with the pencil//
Few have had my back in the long run, damn its been a hard one//
From being a battle rapper, now Im The One And Only son//
Started out as a hobby, grew into an obsession//
Rhymes, skill and convention, my only possession//
Every celeb that pisses me off, im making fun, bar none//
Ill take cheap shots at Prince or Michael Jackson//
Hurts feelings, but in the long run its in fun//
Why cant you just believe I have skill and just let it be?//
Why do you insist on me being an addict raping more then Kobe?///
Why cant I be a whitey and still grow up to MC?//
Oh no, hes cant flow, no way, hes from suburban GB//
I thrive on your lack of slack and your shit, go ahead, it makes me slave
To work hard so Ill just sit back and laugh as I piss on your graves//

[hook]
Im a renegade (Im a renegade)
Against All Adversady (All adversady}
Showing All You (Alla You)
For Ever Doubting Me (Doubting Me}
[repeat]

[Verse 2]

Is it that unbelievable to the point that its unconceivable?//
That I can rise out of the ashes and grasp a goal otherwise unreachable?//
That I can flow and spits slurs so bad that its deemed unspeakable?//
Slap a parental advisory sticker on my mouth and call me uncureable//
Or is it just unperceivable that I could actually rap with a purpose//
To express and project my thoughts a little at a time to make it hurtless//
To show the aspects of being a rapper with no Tech//
Ill still swipe a knife roll by in the nigh with no flashlight and snatch ya wife//
Leave a ransom letter saying "A record deal or her life"//
Then send you're her finger in seraan wrap wrapped up tight//
And as a joke drop album, called "Dark Days, Bright Nights"//<<Bubba Sparxxx Diss>>
I say these things, cuz groupies scream keep appearing in Z's dreams//
The way it seems, the only time I see these things shouldn't be after OD'ing on Mescaline//
So I spit controversial and homophobic things, so I can be seen//
I talk so much shit, its almost impossible to keep me clean//
What you guys don't realize is I'm my worst critic//
If I drop a line and don't hit it I will stick wit it//
Even if I starve, but don't get it I will not quit it//
Cuz Ill bleed myself before I displease myself//
Im a musical misfit, I accept where I sit//
But I do it for fun, so the money and cars don't mean shit//
All that matters to me is getting that one big hit//
I came a long long, but I still got so far to go//
Its A2Z in ya stereo, fuck that soon to be on ya radio//

[hook]
Im a renegade (Im a renegade)
Against All Adversady (All adversady}
Showing All You (Alla You)
For Ever Doubting Me (Doubting Me}
[repeat]

[Verse 3]

Dear God, Whats up, its A2Z again//
I must be irritating, 'nother ment'lly blocked pen//
Im not shure how long I stay here and go on fo'//
Ive lost the will to try and its so close//
But ya took some of my best friends away from me//
Show me ya there, show me no reason for anarchy//
Ive strayed away from the path but I need to see//
If im what im doing here is the true me//
Cuz I want this rap to work so bad//
Its one of the best skills ive wanted and had//
But the words so easily slip away from me//
And I fall into darkness, into catastrophe//
If Allen Iverson can rap, God, why not me//
Sometimes the effect of it sinks in and I break down and cry//
Im scared God cuz I know in this game, it either do or die//
Well, I gota go write some rhymes…a little hlp if you please//
Father, Son, Holy Spirit…Sincerely A2Z//

[hook]
Im a renegade (Im a renegade)
Against All Adversady (All adversady}
Showing All You (Alla You)
For Ever Doubting Me (Doubting Me}
[repeat]
[x2]


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Yo feelin this drop entirely dawg,i've had some of tha same struggle with peeps doubting an shit,i think everyone has,but liked tha concept and tha vocab didn't let tha peice slide,good drop,a collab bout another issue like this might be on tha cards.

that was ill

up.
yes up.
even higher up.
stop.
lower up.
thank you.
right there.
prefect.
Ahh! You moved it.
Lower...
Higher...
Perfect.

that was some deep shit man.........I was feelin it I was feelin it. Keep spittin that shit dawg
8/10

that shit was hard put that on audio

Nice song, definitely record that...how long did that take you to write? Sounds really personal (deep lyrics, to be specific). Keep up the good work. 9/10

^^took me like 2 hours

tight tight and tight,good shit from u dawg as i would expect, all in their somewhere fosure, n i can relate to ya topic.... only off thing i would say was that maybe u got alittle writers for the final verse, seemed hurried n streched compared to the others... good shit

9/10 for sure, that was tight tight ....tight ill drop keep flowin man

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The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

I don't know duke. I like the concept, but I just couldn't feel this jont from reading it.

illest shit i ever read from you ...hot chorus...nice lines...bangin 9/10