denial of my own rivalry of inner self
a battle of witts, from one head written down
it was once said "invision power to conquer"
now it's given to whoever has tha biggest sponsor
'cause tha green eyed monster's ceized up the whole world
money in pockets, greed clutched like high gears droppin'
on a constant I hear talkin' often blockin' common sense
wack emcees like Ja gone pop still bombin' on sets it doesn't make sense
it's tha destruction of rap, corruption of tracks,
'cause there's somethin' y'all lack, it's called heart
and will to survive, ol' G's killed to get by
you geeks still don't know why, you ain't gangsta
face ya facade straight on an' take a hard look, you soft
so often I'm stopped gawking at mocking rockers in concert
try'n-a flaunt their worth in an' out tha sound booth
since birth I been 'round you ill pronounced fools
skill ammounts to half ma-scribble, riddle a little
fiddle with grammar an' whittle a beat to defeat pitiful emcees
leap out tha ninteenth balcony an' reap tha benifits of new heights reached
at two times the speed of these rude rhymin' freaks...

a decision to riddle in inscription
inflictin' with political decisions
a literal preminition of witts 'n' instinct
'cause a collision of kids an' this thing...

try'n to rhyme a synonym that isn't fittin' in
listnin' to this insulent vision written in blood
wishin' you thug, why so you can go out tha same way as pac
die in vein slain' at a red light waitin' ta advance
cancer in sentences spread an' get into your head
plans to enter in with a winning hand foiled by a cramped style
a lanced mind, stabbed by my last line, that's fine
as long as you know why I write
with the intention of dispensin' dried vines
entangled an' stranglin' the industry staqndards 8 miles high
eminem changed nine lives, startin' with columbine
next on to tha little kitten pussy cats
try'n to be hard 'cause 50 say'n he push'n gats
becomin' hooked on crack an' smacked out for debts
that's why I lash out at vets
'cause I ain't impressed with the pressure they present
I resent every word these faggits said, my patience is at an end
just wait man, you wont be safe with them..


I added a next verse and a hook... that's why it's not short

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damnit i hate when you tease a good subject blunt this needs more to it you were on point with it and it was hitting next time DONT CUT US SHORT....lol
all i can say is certain words need a hint of emotion cap a few to show infasis

lol... a'ight... I might add a bit more.. if I get into the mood.. lol, and I don't cap anything 'cause depending on the beat I spit it to, the emotion changes what words it hits.. nah-m-say'n.. ne-way, I'll add another verse before I bounce today.. I wan-a record this ne-way, so I need to do a hook an' a verse...

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uppin'... I added a next verse

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on da real... why tha fuck does no-one reply to my shit... fuckin' all haters.. like damn yo, I reply to like 15 verses a day..

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Tight verse..i liked tha flow..dope pieace keep spittin peace out playa'

thx dawg.. yo I like that line in your sig.. .mad ill multi..

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^ thanks i used it against one cat in rap basement b-4 the site got upgraded and they putted some wack ass message board instead of tha old 1..so anyway with this verse i ripped tha guy 6-0 lol anyway i heard ya audios man they R off tha hook u got skill G