Adults always sayin "solve problems by words"/
Then all these wars happen, bombs droppin, its absurd/
Innocent people crying, as their loved ones dying/

We got it lucky over here, no bombs ever drop/
We the creme of the crop, were on top/
Closest we get to droppin bombs is on a game console/
To others it a daily uppin count on the poll/

One day we'll kill ourselves off and be no more/
One big war, way to much gore/
Kids with guns, shootin other brothers/
Sons dying the arms of their mothers/
Every 10 minutes, its down to the basement to cover up and lay low to the floor/
Nuclear weapons destroyin the Earth right to the core/
All one big war/
Over something that could be solved by words/
As the parents taught us, and brought us up to do/
Fuck that shit to survive in this fucked up planet, give me a gun/ I'll shoot my way through, only way to survive, thats true/

Where am I now, 6 feet under, 5 shots to the chest/
Fuck this shit is messed, I wish for peace as I rest/
I was killed by someone like me/
Had a wive, kids, worked 9 to 5, an average guy, someone just like me/
Don't you get it now, we all the same/
different color, language, religion, fuck those excuses were the ones to blame/
We start all this shit for money, gettin the worlds best oil/
Thinkin about that shit makes my blood boil/

Work the problems out by communication/
Don't load the gun with ammunition, shootin up another nation/

Heard the song by Black Eyed Peas, that kinda inspired this

very concious and political yet also crossess the line from ubserd to just real enough to catch the peoples attention i give this an 8 out of 10 needed some refining tight though

hey man thanks alot for the input...if ya post I'll check it out

can I get some more people commenting on this?

uppin this...can ya people please comment
leave a link I'll drop on yours

cool, i like what you were tryin to do here. i think it halfway feel off at the "fuck this shit" line. cause it was all on topic about peace but then it was like you caved in. but i did like how you brought it back togather in the last verse with the "we're all the same" line. nice post. keep rappin about the stuff other people stay away from. well except B.E.P.

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""Accustomed to trample on the rights of others, you have lost the genius of your own independence and become the fit subjects of the first cunning tyrant who rises among you." --Abraham Lincoln, speech, September 11, 1858

Nice love the meaning behind it and all good job!

yeah it was good
7/10

[QUOTE]Originally posted by Whyte Ave.
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One day we'll kill ourselves off and be no more/
One big war, way to much gore/
Kids with guns, shootin other brothers/
Sons dying the arms of their mothers/
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this is what got me ^^^^
i really liked to emotion put into this
it lays a picture out right it front of you
this is so true about with it said stay up and keep writing
just returning the favor

Yo kid this was ill it had a message and i feel lyrics with messages are the best ones so keep spittin and i keep reading one

too simple 4 my liking.... I like the topic, but your scheme was elementary, you were using fore-shadowing of the war in the first line, that was like the only wordplay in this piece, 'could be alot more... ne-way... it had an ' a'ight flow, I'll give u a 6/10

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