This 4 verses are some shit I had on my mind,that I wanted to share with eveyone.

How it is

Oh well,yeah that's the way that I'm feelin'/
Niggas is dissin' and usually I'll be illin'/
And talk about killin', I guess I lost my spark/
I use to get on here in the mornin' and don't get off til it was dark/
But now, niggas want me gone, and I'm happy 'bout that/
I ain't been on here a while and niggas dissin' behind my back/
I see it's like that,yep,it's all gravy/
Niggas think I'm crazy,naw I just like to beef/
Like to see niggas gettin' tuff and talk shit to me/
But now,I'm just sayin' fuck it/
I'm bored like a mothafucka,I can go kick a bucket/
Oh well,Yeah, it was fun in the beginnin'/
The losin' and winnin', it just gave me a rush/
Rap against niggas,naw, I never loss my touch/
I just need to get it back,but first,I need niggas to get off my nutsack/
Stop the hatin',none of mothafuckas know me/
I'm a true gangsta,and I ain't playin homie/
But!!Oh well,what a nigga to do?/
Everybody claim to be one,so no one will believe you/


My Experiences

When I was gone,I dealt with some racism/
Met an asian,who had a lil hate in him/
I got furious,but his words brought me down/
But then I realize,he wasn't shit but a clown/
I knew,if I was in his face/
He would have never said anything to put blacks in disgrace/
Oh well,he was just on the internet/
I just had to share that cause I never even been thru that/


My Ups

Even thru all the bad luck and misfortune,I've ben pump thru/
God made me happy and made me an uncle/
Yeah,my bro just had a baby/
Christian Rahmel Malone is what the lord gave me/
I adore him, and I can't til he get older/
Can't wait to hear him talk,can't wait to put him on my shoulder/
Take him places,yeah,I'm goin' to show him a good time/
My lil nephew,yeah,you're all mine/
I LOVE YOU....

My Downs

On the downside,I've been goin' thru some shit/
I got shot at,lucky none of the bullets hit/
See let me tell yall the story,of what really really happened/
I had went back to sellin' drugs and lately ,I've been slackin'/
Me and my niggas,walkin' across this spot we call the bridge/
They wasn't good friends,just some niggas I chilled with/
And keep in mine,I'm from Detroit and I'm 14/
So there is alot of gangs like NBA court teams/
See,some niggas repin' some shit called Schoolcraft/
I came across one nigga,who thought he was a cool cat/
The niggas I was with,flipped out and started jump him/
The nigga got some boys to come back to rumble/
I wasn't in it,that wasn't even my click/
Like I said before it was just some niggas I chilled wit/
I stood on the side line watchin' them scrap/
One of the niggas I was wit,got his head cracked/
I then jumped in it,hit a nigga or two/
But after the scrap they said "Nigga where was you?"/
"Where was I?" I said looked at them and left/
But lil did I know,the beef wasn't over yet/
One day,I'm comin' out of summer school/
They came back tryin' to merk me,wit a whole bunch of dudes/
I'm by myself,so ran my ass home/
Next day,I see these niggas wit some chrome/
i'm like damn,these think they the shit/
I left school early,to call up my click/
I think yall all know,G.A. is a real thang/
So I got on the phone,and call Bloodbank/
His real name is Dee Dee,I told him where to meet me/
Behind the school at 12:30/
I told him to bring Breezie,Gary and Birdy/
He came,I say it was about 12:31/
I told them what the deal was,did he have a gun/
This idiot,forgot his heat,right after that,who start comin' down the street/
That's right,the niggas from before,with guns and shit,in a ragedy as Ford/
We all ran,straight thru Cloverlawn alley/
I heard one yell,Greg,you a lil bitch/
Right after that,it's like they emptied a clip/
We all hit the deck,got up and ran some more/
Jumped over a fence and now we was at my backdoor/
Thinkin' to myself,damn what have I did now/
How I'm goin' to get over this,someone tell me now/
Fuck it,I rather get jumped then shot/
Next day of school,I'm goin' to bring a lock/
Yeah,with the lock in my hand,I walked up on one and beat him til he couldn't stand/
Right after that,I was on the floor myself/
Gettin' stomped and kicked,ballin' up to protect my health/
About 5 minutes later it was all done/
Got up and left,sayin' yeah I really won/
As long as I'm not dead,and as long as I didn't get shot in my head/
For now,they think it's over,nope,I went home to think my beatin' over/
I will get them all back one by one,with no bullets and no gun/

The End

This is the end,I hoped yall liked it,if yall didn't oh well/
Yall just should just be happy that I'm alive and well/
Peace out my people,this is last of my tales.

Yo, that was tite shi' dawg. Be happy wit dis one...

I felt the first verse the most, I know you really felt the first verse, I dropped something like that where the best verse was really the first and then I dunno, Go peep it plz, But the my experiences wasn't good. and "he was shit but a clown" ain't make sense. but its was a good open mic. worthy of a 8/10.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=66947

peep that plz. and if really leaving,

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^^^ I seen what you was talkin about.I fixed it.It was suppose to say he wasn't shit but a clown...lol...oh well.

That was aite... even though most of it didn't rhyme that much... it was a story coming form the heart so i felt that, i don't know why everybody hates you around here but i don't know you so i don't hate, whatever, peace.

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was ok for a noob, nottin stood out no flow, pretty elimental... overall iight

How are you going to call me a newbie,when got a better battle record then you and more posts.That is the exact reason why we was beefin.That is the exact reason why I made this song.For niggas like you....oh well

this was beatiful............stay spittin shit like this

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that was straight up awesome i enjoyed that shit keep spittin dawg

this was wack wack vocab no flow no one actually read it they just said that to shut u up...........I own you ~bitch~

Biggest newb of the all~yung gadget~

P.s Lets battle

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More Comming soon!

Can some please tell ^^ this guy to stop comin' to all the threads I make.What you doin' is ordinary beef...it's harassment.Don't say shit to me, and bitch, learn how to spell.


P.s. I own your mother.

This was nice
diggin this
7.5/10