You spit first dawg I won't be back for a half hour

aight

u set it up now i'll spit first, i aint waitin for ya verse butchu waitin for ya herse//
to take u in ya coffin,im stoppin u frum poppin, and coppin a win cuz i got headz boppin//
but u mista rippa u a pain in da neck, i'll rearange ya whole set witcha own damn teck//
in my mind frame, da games been slayed,ur lamed, easily tamed thatz why u still on da chain//
i ripped da chain off,so i can cause sum terror,kick u off da throne im da next heir, u fuckin error//
i rep da dolla krew, and i bring da ruckus,u dumb muhfuka,wut made u think u could rush us?//
itz da dolla krew shorten it to "da D", how can u rap? u still learnin da abc's//
and ya 1,2,3's dis my victory,look ur history,u cant get next to me//
to battle me u must be at least 5 feet tall,but i leave u 6 feet deep so u aint ready to brawl//
i snap ya bra strap,leave a welt on ya back,ya game summed up to one word is "wack"//
im killin dis kid,better yet i'll merk,give ya lyrics ya jerk and ur fucken brain'll hurt//
i'll give u an eyestrain, im like a migrane, need more than tylenol extra strenght//
u soft i could stab u if u had a flak coat, this dudes wack now im uppin for votes//

(flak coat=flak jacket=bullet proof vest)

peace
good luck
happy spitten

Your on the brink of destruction, save that bull shit introduction, your function is to get some new rhymes that shit was weaker then a ~munchkin~
Your lame, Your should refrain from, fightin good rappers like me, cause I saw you writin that shit on the crapper, I'm light up your body faster then you can light a room with a ~clapper~
You don't know what I been through, but thats nothin to you, your in the game for fame, but your gold chains are fake, I rake you like leaves, you betta leave that cap gun you shot had no ~aim~
Ya missed me ya missed me but don't think about kissin me, I slit your lip you see, and set your soul free from your fucked 2 inch dick body, It's a masta peice the catastrophy I gave to ~thee~
your rep for rappin, Reppin has just been recked son, you aint even in a crew, you just made that shit up ya bum, and I'm bumin the dumb theres no place for you to hide or run, I spit on your tongue those words that you ~flung~
Theres no place for a fake rippa, I flipped your shit right back on ya, my dick is tired cause I already fucked ya up, I blew your dick up, so when you got to the doc you gotta squat to piss in his ~cup~
You say in your sig you got weed hoes and dough, but how would you know? the dough you got you blow on hoes, who fuck you up worse then that weed that they ~smoke~
I'm stronger better and faster then you, kickin jews like you is what I was put on earth to do, the sky ain't blue anymore its red cause its filled with your crimson pussy ~juice~
Well this is my last line this battle was fun, to stomp on your lungs, and cut of your little gun, and with these last words you've been ~hung~

ugh sorry bout my long lines couldn't shortin them really
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uppin!
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Uppin come on yall we need votes
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Uppin :\
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67489

^^^ please vote above for me voting here...

d-krew_reppin-

-your rhyme scheme needs work... you need to rhyme your lines better!
-your intro was weak... you need to punch him to open it up!

itz da dolla krew shorten it to "da D", how can u rap? u still learnin da abc's//

^^^ best line

-your last bar (closer) was not good either! need to punch harder

~JacK ThA RippA~

-good rhyme scheme... a little better then d-krew
-better wordplay then d-krew
-better personal disses and harder punches.
-decent closer... better then d-krew

VOTE: Jack

Thanks god and uppin!
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lol

d crew ur pretty good at rhyming but thats bout' it
jack
ripped u wit wordplay n better verse n all dat shit

vote jack tha ripper

please peep

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=66240

fuck i cant fukn poll vote

Jack took it by far. he had way better punches and flow vote = jack.............................................. ..................................................

some straight shit
both of ya need ta elevate

how bout ya battle me for elevation?
if ya down PM me and i'll set it up!

jack had betta flow and punches, unfortunetly krew didnt come hard enough straight battle yo mad props

vote-jack


yo can u hit dis up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67265

Jack had a better flow
punches and wordplay

he merked the other cat

hook one of mine up

VOte Jack the rippa