Ok i'm in a crew now.But i'm looking for feedback.
yo, it's like i'm 'walkin on vision' the way i ~stepped-ta-dis-site~
~exceptin-the-mic~ reppin 11th cuz i'm~expectin-a-fight~//1

battlin me is death son, why don't ~step-ta-da-light~
~this-vet-wid-insight~ bout to~ignite~ ya ~honarable-mention~//2

i got so ~elevated' even heaven ~called-for-an-extention~
so bring ya~slaughterable-henchmen~ even ya starters will be warmin~the-bench-then~//3

~barred-by-rhymes~ i'll~scar-ya-minds~ like a game of spaides and~discard-da-nines~
they call me a cama( , ) cuz i'll take~apart-ya-lines~ shit, i'm just warmin up, i could spit this hard doin~it-all-in-sign~(language)//4(FLIP STYLES)

(F) ree da mind. cuz G's devine, better scoop me up cuz ima bout tp leave these mc's behind
(R)eap n grind, battle me and i'll take a broom to ya optiks just to sweep you blind
it's like i got stocks in hell cuz the heat is mine
(E)ase the time with ya thoughts i'll let the keys rewind ( re read it for the slow)
with me in ya roster even the SICKEST will be askin PLEASE ?BeKIND
(E)pik scripts leavin these vets in rips, turnin me down would be like wesson not exceptin KLIPS

(A)grressive sick like aids obsessive dicks, acess this shit cuz the best Gift (FLIP STYLES)i seen ya tryout post, what kind of ~contest-is-this~
(G)ot a gat in my teeth just to ~dispurse-three-duces~
have you second guessin ya click, questionin who the real barrer of~bad-news-is~
(E)ven the blind see the genius in rhyme, be straight fuckin ya brain like ya got a penis in mind
(N) ector rhymes cuz my style is sweet, hannibal lector in mind with murderous streek
(T)a the victor, no ones heard of the weak. i'm intoxicating the way i bring slurr ta ya speech

i'll disconnect these gays like fag with a bad connection
not pickin me up would be more confusing then a baby phat model with a bad complexion

This was def. tight

lovin this peice right here

9/10