yo this goes out, to all the people who talk shit about me behind my back....i'm sick of it

ayo, if you bitches wanna talk go ahead and talk
but if ya talk bout me your gonna end up surrounded in chalk
your gonna end up dead in a pool of red
drowing in your own blood that you bled
you bitches need to shut the fuck up and mind your own business
i'm pretty sure this is my life not yours is it
so if you wanna talk come talk straight to my face
i'll leave ya hung from my ceiling with a shoe lace
i never had beef with you till you stole my girl
then i was just angry at the whole world
i admit i got over it, till i heard you were sayin shit
now i'm pissed and can't wait till i see you bitch
maybe i hear wrong and maybe your not sayin shit
and i don't really give a fuck if you didn't say stuff
it's just the way i be, gotta stay strong and tough
and by the way you look like a fuckin goof
go ahead and look in the mirror there's ya proof
yeh i know i'm an "asshole" and not a nice guy sometimes
but go ahead and keep it up, and oyur gonna see me commit a crime

peace<
up this shit

that was pretty good
need ta make it longer tho
and put it in verses

nice tho! PROPS

put the shit in verses add a hook and you might have somethin there

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thanks
keep uppin

ummm.... it was pretty hott but that shit was kinda borin. but true throw some chorus on it and it would be hott

this was not that amazing but still it was good

Yo, that was a'ight...keep doin' dis, dawg.

it sucked fucking ass

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fucka X.L.G nigga..