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Old 07-21-03, 04:46 PM   #1
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Bash...Reality

IP: 96EB 9617

Bash staked me while eatin his steak(ate the beef)

I ain't the one to sit and daze i nu that my ass wasn't gonna be saved, Bash did put me to my grave now im a ghost again, N winning wasn't what i craved jus that i wasn't gonna get played with out fightin for the day/
The day is over but yet the page hasn't even turned over, it wasn't a shock to this bawler that i was going under Bash was out as the hunter/
But i needn't pray to get better i was jus prayed by the better the battle was hot yet didn't burn my retina...weird...nah...jus that why nyg had beef wit bre was an enigma/
I'm the logical type...i wouldn't stand down, cuz you'd stand up so i'm pro-found...guess i found bash(ur a pro)
But jus that i found reality beatin bash was like trying to defy gravity...it can be done but wasn't dun/

Ima stop now cuz ima battle youngblood...carry on later...jus a quik freestyle sayin...i nu i was gonna loose to Bash...but why not try and make a battle go to the furthest...oNe

o n i guessrepsect to Bash

but Fuc Bre
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Old 07-21-03, 05:06 PM   #2
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Even Though I'm A Patriotic Constituent Of B.R.E, I'll rate This Fairly!

Rhyming/Flow
Flowed Killa Foor The First Few Lines, Then Crashed n' Burned At The End! Rhymed Well Inside The Lines...7/10

Vocab/Wordplay
Was O.k, Nothing Special But It Was Above Average! 6/10

Concept/Topic
Yea, Dissed, Punched The Works..It Could've Been Longer Though...6/10

Overall
I SHould GIve This A 0 For Dissing My Crew, BUt..meh....6/10 - Could've Been Way Better Structured With More Vocab!
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