HERES THE RULES

i spit first
10-20 lines
no crew
no hate
no dick rydin (especially)

ill vote on this when its done but in the mean time vote on mine please.............honest shit

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=67213

yo i just saw this shit pot1ent, so i'll spit like 20 min after u do, but meanwhile im facing someone else, so hit this up with an honest vote, thanx http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67237

youngblood check this homie...

This vet may eventually become illmatic when i spit antibiotics,
Then he'll be anti-bot-spits and he'll have to change his lyrics,
(he noramlly use un-original rhymes)
Instead of the usual rhymes, somone with there hand up this puppet/(you ain't original)

You ain't true to your name...you can't heal this sick dawg,
Even if you had a veternarian phd could you do the job/
(your so dumb)

You clam up like you was a sea-creature cuz i flow like the ocean,
I use capital punishment cuz your teacher jus beat-ya dun/
(ur getting schooled by me)

From bad experiance in this battle you won't be able to-peer-in-this/
So you won't have a clue who's winnin... even if ya cheated in cluedo so ill tell-ya...ya loosin/

Don't be confusing jus cuz you normaly win-when-your-battlin
Im here beatin you cuz you only beat peeps form kindrgarden/
(u only battle newbs)

You couldn't have young blood if you had the gaunltet of youth,
Your havin a mid-live-crisis like tryna match this while
pro-duc-in/
(havin a crisis tryna match this)

Don't even suppose(sir-pose) your winnin this through brawn,
Cuz your a gentle-men this is for thugs n you left scorned/

Like malting metal to the delicate skin of jennifer Lopez,
This guy couldn't be bold even if he were malting hairz/
(you can't be bold, jus confuse)

I'll pop-ya-head n you left(grave)stoned cuz you a pot-dead(check bio) and i couldn't be killed if i were shot-dead n your rhymes couldn't be heated if they were hot-red n this was a headful not assfull that you jus got-lead/

oNe

aight yo....the force deliverd from this format, will crush your lyrical form-FLAT!//
leave you lookin FLAT like signz in corn-stacks, and thin-lined doormats//check, i write
more sick shit then sites with porn-chats, wit more sparks then storm-
maps//leave the pages with your written, ~RIPPPed~, wit torn-stats...

yo...u sopposably spit fresh, ~but how?~, when u have a bad taste of spit-to-
start-out//i'd RIP u like i'd RIP the rest of RIP (R.I.P), and twist-ur-hart-
out//check...i insist u quick, before u-looze-your-self, ~go ahead~, DQ-your-
self//do u really want to make a fool of yourself, well i use medical tools to un---
-->screw-ur-health//i got this kid panikan so much, that he'll go do-him-self (do-
as in kill)...and save me time on doin-it//FUCK THAT!, stay livin, i wanna enjoy
tha fission, and watch the rhythm stab-through-ur-ribs...

the wordz ur spittin, looks like shit i-read-off-the-net//if i catch you
bitin son, i'll RIP your fuck-head-off-your-neck..

i'll rip ur ADAMS-APPLE out ya mouth, well hez mad-yellin//he poses
as a felon, when the only crime hez ever commited was bad-spellin//

i'll RIP ur fuckin heart out ur chest. leavin this kid-wit-torn-ribs//no-
one likes you even ur friend THUGZDOCRY be like, "pot1ents-a-deformed-kid"!!!!!!

i dunno i was just feelin Youngblood's verse more very hot battle tho very hot

everything was a tie except for punches i think YB just had better punches

Vote ~ Youngblood

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i agree

both verses was iight but yb came harder

he lookin 4 the win

if anyones lookin 4 a crew try-out for The Dream Team

vote=yb

g'lucc<--stole it from someone but i'm still gonna use it LOL it means good luck

I dont kno
Hot battle but i was feelin Young a lil bit more
It was really close
Young Had harder punches

Vote=Youngblood

if i can poll this shit i will but i have a FUCKING PROB IT SAYS I HAVENT POSTED AN EXPLINATION so il try anyway at least him uping this anywya

vote=youngblood cos he came harder and he had much better worldplay in my eyes ya'all vote fairly here

yo both were tight but young came hell of stong hisfirt par one was redefinig illness..let olone the rest..........ut pot1ent ur shit was tight too just that younghit a ll harder

the wordz ur spittin, looks like shit i-read-off-the-net//if i catch you
bitin son, i'll RIP your fuck-head-off-your-neck...
mean shit ...

ya young got this one for sure.....it was a lite battle....betta punches and vocab.
my vote goes to young*

yo young your verse was real tite...the first part was trully ill and the flow was hot through-out...i really didn't feel any of your pucnhes after the first part tho...all seemed rip this n rip that there was no wordplay there either but that jus my opinion...i thought it'd be a hot battle n it was...uppin 4 votes plz...props to young blood...

yeah im a have to go with young...............he had some hard shit.....like the newb said he was redefining.....you props to both...ya both had some ill stuff but i feel young had some harder stuff....props keep at this shit ya were tight...

yea pot1ent props 2 you also homie, don't hold anything against me for dissin your crew leader, but yeah, props to u, mad respect. nice, nice battle homie