15 lines
i spit first
no feedin or pre written shit
aiight

15? Aight coo
************************************************** **************************************************

Ok since your not here I'm gonna spit dawg
************************************************** **************************************************
I'll just make it like it was after your rap

vote here honestly and i'll return all honest favors
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=67451

Ok My shit is gonna be pretty long but probably not 15 lines so I'm assumin you meant 15 lines or less so here it is.... My first ever battle... If you can, can you tell me how I did? Thanks

I'm roughin ya while gunnin ya, usein a peace maker to blow out your pacemaker, my rhymes are so hot that they cookin ya like a ~baker~
I'm rakein ya, rippin that shit you spit and I don't wanna hear it cause that shit was ~prewritten~
by your dick I'm quick to pick a fight with a prick(you) and win by throwin you in a ditch with a bitch you better not ~flinch~
Your shit is fake it should be taken to the whackness emergency centa, nah even if you go there you won't get any ~betta~,
your ghetto white boy raps are crap and don't diserve to be read, So I'll suck your blood and slash your face till the color of my claws turn ~red~
So I'll pop a cap and break your ass, my name is jack and I rape that whack like your self so deal with ~that~,
You diserve to be a in strait jacket though cause your a crazy mother fuckin hoe, I aint got time for those so I'll murder ya and then go to blow your holy family up like that and hang them to a ~rope~
You ain't go no flow or punches, I'm eatin ya and spittin ya out like your crunchy its funny, your shit is lame, old and crumby, My raps are new and I'll never quit just like the duracell ~bunny~
To finish you off I'll lurk and go berserk wipp ya whack fake ass back, This raps all wrapped up and you've just been ~merked~

you could'nt "spit shit", if your saliva was made out of feces
fucked up rhymes got you dissappearing,like endangered species

jack tha "strippa", i got hits just like in black-jack
you come "flat" like when Whitney and Bobby packed-crack

rearrange your style, like plastic surgeons givin out "nose-jobs'
stupid muthafucker, you would get fired from givin out blow "jobs"

you are startin to bleed, bitch, let me give you a "kotex"
you come across counterfiet, just like your a bootleged "Rolex"

I got my dick in your ear, and iam fuckin your brains out
you look just about as stupid, as that bitch from "no doubt"

after this batttle you will be suicidal like nirvavna
cut ya into pieces like a homocidal pirana
split yo wig open like a fuckin piniata
make yo ass sweat like you live in a sauna
look at you bitch your shakin in trauma

uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .

straigh jacket took this
jack jus got ripped

STraight had better dissing punches meta's and wordplay

vote=straight jacket

not bad boss
I thought tha flow was a little off
and tha whole whackness emergency center is played out

Damn I must suck :\ uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......

just have fun with it jack that's all we are out here for............................................... .................................................. .................................................. ...........................

Uppin... Its obvious that I must suck and Str8 won...
************************************************** **************************************************

uppin
************************************************** **************************************************

uppin, come on people dont sleep we need to close this out////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////