WHY DO MANY PEOPLE TRY HARD TO BE A G/
SAY THEY GOT AGUN AND CLAIM TO CUM FROM THE STREETS/
LOSE THE HEART OF THE GAME COS YOU DONT SAY WHAT U SEE/
THE ONLY SHOOTIN YOU SAW HAPPENED ON THE T.V/
YOU WANT IN IT BEFORE NOW YOUR IN IT REAL DEEP/
YOU FEEL YOUR STUCK IN A CAGE AND U CANT FIND A KEY/
NOW THE GANGSTER YOUVE ALWAYS WANTED TO BE/
AND YOU DONT LIKE IT NOMORE AND YOU LONG TO BE FREE/
ONCE YOU GET TO FAR TURNIN BACK AINT EASY/
YOU CANT GET A JOB COS THE PAST THAT U KEEP/
PEOPLE STILL DONT WANNA LISTEN TO THE LYRICS I SPEAK/
THERES 2 ENDS IN THE GAME PEN OF ETERNAL SLEEP/






CAN I SAY I I KNOW SUM ARE FORCED INTO THE G AME BUT THIS IS FOR THE FOOLS WHO TRY TO GET INTO IT OR DONT EVEN TRY BUT SAY THEY LIVE LIKE IT

There Isn't Much To Break Down With This...

Some problems:
1.It's Short
2.POsted In caps
3.Not Much Rhymed Really
4.No Flow!

Some Up's:
1.You Had One Good bar:
LOSE THE HEART OF THE GAME COS YOU DONT SAY WHAT U SEE/
THE ONLY SHOOTIN YOU SAW HAPPENED ON THE T.V/
2.You Have Some Potential!

Keep Elevatin!

dido...