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07-25-03, 04:10 PM
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February 28, 2001 - March 4, 2001
IP: 3FEC 444C
5:00 pm Feb 28
Today seems like a good day to get wasted I meet my best friend Josh after work We run into my mother so I can con ten bucks out of her I lie, I tell her that we're going bowling with friends 5:45 pm We go searching for a buyer in his Ford Ranger We find a Native brother to get us some 40's He buys five Magnum forties and keeps one himself We drop him off back at his house and start drinking 7:00 pm We head over to Jared's house to hang out He has a couple brews of his own We continue drinking and both finish a forty off Jared's woman is coming over so Josh and I head out 8:15 pm We go over to Josh's uncles house and shoot pool I head outside to piss and it starts raining Josh's uncle is really good at pool, winning every time we polish off the other forties having two and a half each 10:30 pm Josh drops me off at my house, it's still raining I tell him i'll see him tomorrow night After he goes to his Pantera concert I go home and go upstairs to sleep To be Continued............ |
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07-25-03, 04:11 PM
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IP: 3FEC 444C
hey im runnin out of time so ill finish it tomorrow
peace |
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07-25-03, 07:03 PM
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IP: 84B7 08E9
Er, interesting. The poetry in it is faint. I can most definetly see what you're trying to do. And i'm feeling parts of it. But i just didn't get it into poetically as much as i 'should've'. I dunno, maybe when it's finished. But even then, i feel there's one too many holes. In many poetic senses.
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07-26-03, 07:11 PM
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IP: 3FEC 444C
this is the continuance of the poem,
12:00 pm Feb 29, Friday Just getting dressed for another day of smoking weed My brother and I go ball at the courts to kill my hangover I stay out all day as usual until the evening When I go home and call Josh, Weird, no answer 10:20 pm I go next door to my neighbors to see what's going on for the night As soon as I walk in I see Austin on the phone, he says "He just walked in" I notice everyone is sitting down quietly, odd, usually upbeat cats I'm surprised, it's not my house and I'm getting phone calls 10:22 pm I talk to Jessica on the phone, "what's up girl?" She isn't her playful self neither, what's going on? She asks me if I watched the news or read the newspaper today No, I don't waste my time on that shit, comics & crosswords 10:23 pm I sense sadness as she strains her voice I notice she chokes back tears and tries to talk In a burst of sorrow she releases her tears Trying to regroup her self she unfolds the whole story 10:25 pm Yesterday Josh went over to our friend Steven's They drank a beer a piece as Steven ran out Thirsty and looking to get drunk they wanted more No cash in hand they decided to grab n go Getting into his Ford Ranger Josh flicked his wipers on Liquor store closes in ten minutes so gotta hurry speeding down 23rd going 70+ in a 45 zone Shit times running out then OH SHIT!!!! Hydroplaning 23rd and Lawrence Ave A Ford Ranger is no match for a Utility Pole Driver's side collides and Steve is ejected By the time help arrives Josh is slipping and Steve is unconscious On the way to the ER Josh is gone at 18 10:35 pm I don't believe her at first, No fuckin way! He's fuckin moshin to Pantera right now He's gonna party with me later, we'll get some women NO, NO, NO, NO!!! Fuck that I feel the sickness in my stomach All the questions arise, why, Why , WHY!!! Why someone who is so loved have to die? Everyone asks if I'm alright, Do I look like I'm fuckin alright? I go home and straight upstairs to my room Cry, that's all I do, cry over guilt, fuckin guilt I shouldn't of bought those forties People say it's not my fault. If I hadn't bought that he would still be here But that's what we always do, drink, drink some more Drink and drive, how was I to know that the inevitable would happen? That I would lose my best friend that way, the way I lost my cousin Chad You know the worst fuckin thing is I never learned my lesson from this until I quit drinking I love you Josh, Rest in Peace bro |
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