this will be an audio, gimme feedback on the lyrics.


(hook)
...without darkness, we couldnt have light/
...without weakness, we couldnt have might/
without ability we can't make this thing-bang/
the perfect balance obtained, call it the ying yang/

(verse 1)
i tilt the scales just right to form the perfect balance/
the eco-system before mankind stood on the planet/
before they evolved to homo sapiens filled with malice/
and the choked the earth half to death with toxic fumes and granite/
i've been a long time coming like Dirk in boogie nights/
i've spent a long time sonning cat, doing my duty right/
the evidence is, i'm making sense kid in all this garbage/
equilibrium was missing since the universe started/
ask who hits the hardest, the one you snitch at/
300 hundred years ago, i wouldve been burned for witchcraft/
you bitch ass, its only fair to warn ya/
even if i was incarnated as a school of pirana's/
you couldnt catch me biting, my rhyming tendencies/
are being perfected enough to be divine eventually/
and it would probably, take the time of centuries/
to catch me, arrest me, try and sentence me/

(hook)

we try to strike balance.......(x4)

(verse 2)

the bottom line is, my strength would never equal a minus/
people think my golden touch was taken by force from midas/
but i was assigned-it, to correct the mistakes/
the professor on the blackboard, drop knowledge in his wake/
i'm a perfectionist, possibly obsessive complusive/
because i find even the smallest flaw replusive/
my chi energy is focused like a swarm of locusts/
a hive mind move in my time, dont provoke us/
i've found figures that make my brow rise, asking for help/
surely 5% of the people aint stashing the wealth?/
that means 95%, has only 5 to its name/
thats a factor difference of 3-7-1, insane/
so i concluded from this, that in all probability/
theres a single elite group holding the worlds currency/
who are also, running the, nuclear weaponry/
with an underclass of soldier who are all vetenary/

(hook)

we try to strike balance...(til fade)

blah.

wow...that hook is tight as hell...especially the first 2....the whole idea was great and the vocab and just plain skill really blew me away

score: 8.9/10

15 veiws and 1 reply?? you lazy fucks, this aint a fucking matress, get off your asses and peep this.

sorry bout this but mines getting slpet on too and since your a vet i figured id at least drop the link:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69783

damn.....nice drop......i don't think anything has to be changed before this goes audio, i'll be looking forward to listening to that....