10-20 lines
no crew votes
no d/r votes
no biting
no recycling
no freeposts
no holds barred
U SPIT 1ST

Check in

also since i going first

no feeding off my shit
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AGREED upon your check in

cause im checked in

My verbal langauge is unheard by your weak-ears,so you're forced to "read" while your "eyes tear" showing "internal fear"///// 1

Too late to "walk" cuzz you've met your deFEET-Ice ,Automatic "decapitation" is this "heads" TREAT-Slice//// 2

I should change my name to ICEBERG, cuzz a "chip of me" at COOL is "colder" than what you might-serve///// 3

Your only BLAZING when I "light"-herbs, Cuzz your "weakness" hurts like a stomp on the head when you "bite-curbs"//// 4

Your rhyme schemes "ancient" like "paleobotany"
Ignorant novice-see battling me's like "monopoly", you "pay" for "stepping"' on my battlefields "property"///// 5

Your names "scratched" of the "list", when my "punches"
puncture your "lungs" reconstructing your "lisp"//// 6

My "cremating" bars leave yours "lit", lyrically "burned" to a "crisp"
"Viewers" languages to "echoes" of "Oh No" and "Uh Oh", Since this //// 7

you love "testicles" so much heres a couple "low-blows"
You get "raped" so much your gay lovers "dick" GROWS "corn rows"////// 8

I "beat" you "more times" than you regularly "masturbate", can you relate?
This "dick"? I "castrate" and net contract I "eliminate"///// 9

Verbally is how I "reject" you lyrically, "detect" your wackness "literally",
deFEET "mentally" and "chemically", so much it "spread" to "physically"////// 10

I "beat" you without using "physical" contact, deFEET you so you can't contemplate "walking" a comeback//// 11

You're too-wack, eliminated and BLOWN "instantly" once my "bomb"-raps react ///// 12

I'll inject you with "lethal" remains, leave you laying lyrically "slaughtered" and "slain"/// 13

I administrate pain "growing" on your "head" like "Rogaine", You can't concentrate cuzz I've "emptied" the "nerve cells" in your "brain"//// 14

One "line" of "mine"s "detonates" and "explodes" your entire verse "individually",////// 15

I express "hostility", everytime "I ryhme" spit like my lines only “mines” are “proximities”////' 16

Does your verses line "personify" obliteration? or are they the "epidemies"?//// 17

Your "pre"written "birth" originated from gay “infatuation” and homosexual tendencies//// 18

You couldn't come "ill" as me if you unknowingly, "coughed" my flows with "tuberkulosis" while "quoting-me"///// 19

Icebergs battle tactics? like female orgasms he "fakes"them,"glass" jawed "spits"? I "break"-them
From your "impotent" genetic structure,"doses" of Viagara? you ABUSED trying to be HARD to "create"-them ////// 20

You better drop sumthin

i'll be pissed if i fucking wasted this

you better fucking show


You have till 12:01 am ta drop

Damn Snikill , dat was some Dope shit , I'd be pissed too , if I was left hanging on dat verse .

Could you hit me up on dis ............ and if Iceberg ever drops I'll vote for sure. ( honest though ) , I still got to read his shit.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68830

ce

lmao. nice spit playa

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PhSyCoLoGiCaL LyRiCiSt

It's a Syn-I-KiLL so many emcee's, Now this cat wanna see me, Bitch u couldn't see-me even if I was a High-defenition-T.V./ 1

I-squeeze-3, and let em loose through his mem-o-ry & Leave em like a "Fake-Battery", all juice wit no-energy/2

Lyrically, this guy is no contest, He cant-contest-this-fresh-Lyrical-digest I'm spittin threw his army vest/3

Call the "Wack Doctor" Quick, SyniKiLL Needs some Benadryll, his "hips hurt" from ridin all them dicks/4 (Ha Ha)

I'ma cut-this-fuckin-Dick-Buttkiss, Merk this skirt wearin ass bitch for tryna Buss-this...../5

Weak ass verse-he-dispearsed-that-didn't-hurt, How you u gonna "spit-Shit", when u already have a mouth fulla dirt/6

Son-I'LL-KiLL Syn-IKiLL for tryna act like he-real, He-"Still" thinks my "Steel" won't "steal" his Life when I put it to his grill/7

And-I-feel that U don't yet understand, That its not ok to be gay, so stop givin head to every man/8

Fuckin homo, I pitch punches faster than Hideo Nomo, Like "Double Dragons" I'ma Squash u like Oboboe, in slow-mo/9

Merk this squirt, and put it in my promo, "IceBerg's Lyrical Dojo", I'm no-hoe, Leave ya paranoid like u ate a fresh pack of "No-doze" wit no-clothes/10 (ha ha)

SynikiLL aint nothin but a rookie, Oh lookie, This motha fucka is as sweet as a cookie,........Fuckin Pussy/11

Wanna talk and act like he "Da-Shit", Damn right he "Da-shit", that shit from my toil-et/12

Like a "Crack head Rapper" Syn wanna drop "Dope Lyrics", Talkin bout he the *ILLest known specimen* but nobody wants 2 hear it/ 13 (Check his sig)

Bitch u couldn't be "ILL" even if "AiDs" was ya best friend, Syn-tends-to-pretend that he's not gay, or fuckin men/14 (Ha Ha)

Like "Kevin Nash" Bitch I'm the Meanest "WoLF" up in the "Pack", Took ya flow aint givin it back, Got sick of all the skills u Lacked/15

This bitch saw 8mile so now he thinks he freestyles, Meanwhile I read his bio, He's really-Milly-Vanilli' love child/16 (Ha Ha)

SyniKiLL u shoulda known U couldn't beat ICE, Motha fucka u had a betta chance of getting struck by lightning twice/17

I'm-2-nice I'll-slice-dice ya words thrice, U battlin me is like "Butter" against a "Butcher" knife/18

I'll Screw-ya-wife and take-ya-life if ya not kautios, get-off-this, cuz my raps are so "sick", they'll leave ya nautious/19

Stick a fork in this kid becuz he's done, SyniKiLL got killed so now its over and I've Won/20


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Sorry it took so long, I had to go holla at my girl right quick.....(If ya know what I mean.....Playas)
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tough to judge it was very close but i honestly was feelin synikill on this one
nice drop tho ice u know i got respect just being honest
breakdown:
flow=syn but slightly ice flow was off in some areas
wordplay=syn, to me ice started using a ot of fillers towards the end
structure=both
punches= syn got this one too
metas=both had nice metas
vote=synikill

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8 mile fuckin sucked hated it
dont ever say that cucka again


BOOOOO to that line right there
i was doing this 3 4 years ago befor 8 mile
and befor eminem blew up


and the rookie cookie shit was cacka

some of ya shit was alright the rest sucked

upnn^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Bitch ya whole verse was weak period.

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I "beat" you without using "physical" contact, deFEET you so you can't contemplate "walking" a comeback//// 11

That De-FEET meta has been used about a thousand times. PLAYED.................

Uppin
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