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Its The End
IP: 07E9 8266
Its the end
im tired of the backround havin milions of faint pops from guns bein shot, i hate this place, damn this block is hot the shots are gettin louder now there a loud bang cuz im sorounded by local gangs, but this is my house, this is where i hang i dont know what to do, so i run back inside i hit the floor, is this where i die? my brother runs downstairs, windows being broken loud crys from my sister, these boys are outspoken my brother tosses me his peice, his tringer finger gone i figure we got 5-10 minutes to live, but it wont be that long this is all wrong, why are they doin this to us no time to think i gota stop this fus i put my arm around my sister tellin her not to cry i tell her that i love her, i tell her she will not die then time shatters, and theres a bullet in her head 2 clips in my pocket, 5 bullets left in the gun all of this is lead the other 10 are in 6 people, thats enough said i pull in all my rage, they shot the person i look out for they shot the person i look up to, they shot the person i adore i hoped it didnt come to this, they sliped and i have a vengence last 5 bullets are in 4 bitches, me and my brother will be the only witness i sit and i wind as my mind races with thoughts of suiside (its the end) i wanna strain from my brain of all pictures of the devils eyes (its the end) i think im goin to swith sides, i think its the time ride (its the end) i think i need to decide, if im gana live or die (its the end) ten minutes later, were still not dead, cloths stained red 30 bullets to shed, my brother laid our sister in his bead there jus after me so i jet through the back get through the ally and now im back on track take a few more out, a good shot in the arm drops me to the floor grab my peice befor i i flee, try to get behind the local store i reach in my pocket, i feel my cell phone i start callin up some boys, actin like im Al capone here come 4 of em, all of em with there toys these kids i know are men, but they jus old as boys 1 of em gets me out the other 3 head for my house i hear a few pows and then its silence, and in comes the crowd i sit and i wind as my mind races with thoughts of suiside (its the end) i wanna strain from my brain of all pictures of the devils eyes (its the end) i think im goin to swith sides, i think its the time ride (its the end) i think i need to decide, if im gana live or die (its the end) im drenched in red rain, i feel no pain my eyes are fired red, i got everything to gain im in the ambulance, riding to my death all the pain was on my arm, i was also shot in my chest 2 shots to the sternum, there afraid im gana die i jus wanna no, how this happend and why? puttin me on a stretcher, i can feel my chest and a abnormal heat my chest stars convulsing, my heart stops to beat all of a sudden im seeing it through a new view im watching from above, jus watching what they do i sit and i wind as my mind races with thoughts of suiside (its the end) i wanna strain from my brain of all pictures of the devils eyes (its the end) i think im goin to swith sides, i think its the time ride (its the end) i think i need to decide, if im gana live or die (its the end) |
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IP: CC07 EC19
lol lil_balling_boy, remember dat chat we had? try to employ multis and punchlines in ya shit, nice concept but u need to expand ya vocab to make it more intense, and try to create ironic conclusions, or tension etc, keep elavting, remember next sunday we battle lol
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IP: 07E9 8266
lol ok ill remember that, ill battle anytime with ya
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IP: 1D0A 0DB7
you know what you should do. you should make a song about Life, Nature, Ya Granny. anything besides the average gun killa verse. it makes you grow as an artist and gives you new ideas. PEACE keep it up and check out "Purified Needle" for me if ya dont mind.
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