10 lines max

No recycling

No Feedin

No Hater/Dick ryder/crew votes

You spit first

so check in and spit

yo yo im checkin in dawg.............................................. .........................................im at work so gotta rhyme inbetween, im a spit now doh!!!!!

Simple opener!

This guy thinks he's a famous mass murderer. 1
But as a rapper they say..... I never heard a ya. 2
Jack The Ripper prays on whores and strippers every night. 3
Cuz there the only girls he can get which dont put up a fight. 4

Bringing out da skill!

Hes a reject from a workmans line, unable to pass the QC guy. 5(QC-quality control)
Cuz his lines dont fill my skills specifications, im sending you back for re-evaluation. 6
Cuz your style and ya tactics, are wack as geeky star treck fanatics. 7
Your fronting wearing a good rappers mask, thinkin youd win... when you set this task. 8

Finish Him!

Get Over Here so I can sting you like Scorpians tail, leave you cold like Sub-Zero as in Mortal Combat you fail. 9
You thinking your tough, i'll leave you stuck like Kane cuz I'll electrify you like Rayden leaving you lyricaly drained. 10

A wack verse but hey........

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...?threadid=68791

hit that up and i'll return em

Yo jack where the fuck you at, you off the site pre-writing so you can get a good rap?????

I seen you looking when I checked in who's online, so I was expecting to check this battle and see your rhyme?

So why'd you log off, where the fuck did you go, yo I hope not a pussy so scared your a no show?

Yo spit it son dun takea too longa ok!!!!!!

Fightin verse a whack vet, age is 25, even when he was 13 he couldn't get inta the fly honeies hive, finally 12 years later he got a women but the sad part is he still gotta bribe, he aint got no vibe or rhymes everything I say about him he probably says "word" you should change the font above spida man from vet to "WHACK ~HERB~"

you rap with no punches or flow, to bad I didn't go first cause you woulda got choked, your implicit, I'm explicit, strait and plain I spit it, your heads so far up your moms clit you can't even dish it, your spida man's about to meet my king pin, stop lickin, your mom said she wants to stick her prick in your dick's ~en'd~

I'm remixin ya like coke did to sprite, but no matter how many times I change your brain cell's you still don't come out right, you still bite and don't put up a fight, your just a perilous white herb against your plight, I came by to unleash a blight, whats scarin me the most is how you stare at your daddy drollin when he's in his tights and you keep mutterin "so ~rype~..."

Like an elipsis your whackness is infinit, time to blitz this and make an eclipse to rip the space time continuit, you spit pellets compared to bullets, deep down inside you know everything you say is just full of it, this is like an ancient egyiption myth, bout a rippa who killed an albino chick, that usta have a dick, but in reality its XL4REAL that is a ~myth~

last line I right before this merk, your raps are more boring then when steve ercal (sp?) was talkin about his birth, when you rap you go balistically gesticulate, you think its gonna help cover up those crappy rhymes you spit, well I gotta go, while your waitin for the votes go brib your bitch for a ~dick~

sorry bout the wait XL was eatin lunch nigga
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You are a fucking cheating twat, for a start you went offline then as soon as you come back on ya verse appears in like 10 secs, its so obvious its disgusting, plus your own rules state 10 lines max, I dunno if you cant read but is your shit 10 lins max, no...............

If I could get this closed I would man......

Dude wtf I wa sonline that whole time not offline and I'm not cheating I don't know what the fuck is wrong with you and I said 10 lines MAX! its fair dude and my lines maybe long but there is 5 lines there my lines are always long man I never said a line had a limit so this battle is fair and it is still on

man you cant tell me you were online, I looked in who's online and you were gone, maybe online but not in here!!!!!!!!!!and you aint got ten lines man, with ya structure its hard to know where your lines start and finish.....

Dude I have 5 lines, I said 10 max not min 10 max 10, and I wa sonline man I left my comp on when I went out to lunch I came back and spit for 5 min, and don't be swayin the votes by dissin my structure.

Uppin
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either way
it says im offline but im not
so shut the fuck up x4 real

i dont think that was a pre- anyways

Jack got merked here his shit was real basic
the first line was weak and i almost didnt get it till i read the thing 5 fuckin times

x4real gets my vote for worpdlay and dissing

Jack lenghten ya lines better and people wont bitch

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68969


hit that up 2 when ya get a chance