Light Speed Motion Through
Starlight Twisted Metal With
Bars Panoramic View Tunnel
Vision Fully Armored Car Man
On Mission Im Ready To Make
It All Manageable Eyes Wide
Shut Shed Tears Still While I
Hang On By Strings Of Doubt
For Example Its Like Why Am
I Here And If This Is Really Hell
When Will The Day Arrive That I
Die For This Year Hindsight Claims
This Is The Result Of Wearing
Your Heart On Your Sleeve From
Gazing At The Image Thats The
Feeling From Me Each Step Closer
Is Another Step Away Aspects
Of Fact And Belief Im Only Trying
To Turn The Page And Close This
Chapter So God Whens It Gonna
Happen Is Believing That Your
Dead And Wont Help Us True
Catholicism Or Deceptive Wisdom
None The Less Dont Test You
Couldnt Spot With Laser Surgerys
Corrective Vision Take Another Trip
To The Infirmery Fleet Brain
Im In My Own World Hanging By
A String Of Doubt Searching For
Deliverance My Minds Stays Swingin
For The Fences On Many Instances
Dont Ever Come Forth To The Flow
Of The Ocean Ill Let You Drown In
Your Surroundings Get Caught
In The Commotion And Clip You
Picking Apart The Pixels Playing
Hangman With A Wack Verse
They're Not Rhymes When
They're Just Words
Thats Word Forget You...

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Con-tent....Say It With Me...I Know You Can....

Peace

WOW...the whole concept made me think.

"This Is The Result Of Wearing
Your Heart On Your Sleeve From
Gazing At The Image Thats The
Feeling From Me Each Step Closer
Is Another Step Away "

^^im really feeling this line so much because i actually felt this at some point in my life. The truth behind these words reflected on my whole self and thought upon something that i learnd from the past.

"With A Wack Verse You Dont
Have Rhymes When They're
Just Words Thats Word Forget You..."

^^something between those lines lies an unextractable sense of involvment with my writing. thats awesome.

You put and contructed ur words at some level that you actually trying to make a point.

Its nice to read tho. nice job

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- Tampons are still expensive -
- That's a Fact - </center>

I Know This Is Long As Hell And Its Structured The Way It Is
But It Was Done For A Reason...And he Flows there As Well
Through And Through..I reply To yours So If You Happen To Look
Please do So And Respond As Well..

Peace

Im not even gonna lie to you...i read it..but i comprehended nothign....Your my guy..i'll be honest...A part of me is going away..and I don't know why...and I can't stop it. I'm in tears now telling you this...and I cant stop it. My poetry is lacking..b/c i'm lacking..and you can see that....I don't know anymore..when before I had a few answers...God bless.1...

Somewhat Like A.....

Struggle Slasha Dont Try To Kick
Me When Im Down Or Backed In
A Corner Slasha Individual Attempting
To Find His Way In This World Slasha
Some People Think Think Theyre Ill
When Theyre Not.....

Thats Was My State Of Mind As I Wrote

Wish I Could Help You In Some Way
But Hopefully Your Doing Alright

Cats Dont Really Fall Off They Just Get Uninspired
Miss Believe That Your Talanted

So was this you asking questions (and in a way, answering some) about god as an institution, within the human mind-set and what not?

But yeah, this really is the kind if pieces that i expect from you. Abstract and shrouded in a certain mistiness whihc one must clear before they come to a shallow ground. Where they must dig...

...resp...

Abstract indeed, with an embeded meaning. Like a proclamation; those who think there ill, suffer from ill-intent... instead of claiming to be...just another wasted dollar spent... cuz true illness is defined in the "content"...

respect...

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FUCKA BABYLON BANDIT!!!

Real long, obviously. And that in no way detracts from it. This was one of those reads where you start at the beginning and you don't want to look away until you've read it all.

What else can I say?

~Shalom~

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Quote:

Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.

cough somanytears cough

Thank You To The People That Decided
To Be Respectful And Reply To Those
Who Have Done It For Them

Peace

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i liked it but it was kinda enoying the way u spreaded the lines hard for my eyes to follow back and fourth like that but u spit as if it comes from the heart i feelign that shit man welcome........................................... .................................................. ................................................

Do You Bring Someone In And Then Not Say Whats Up
Anymore...None The Less Your Probaly Busy Homie

Thanks For Replying

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I though it was pretty long but I liked the flow to it...

peAce

it was long but ur reason was ther made me think too, hell of a nice drop keep on elevating
respect