Blunt Mc
on our final length, takin' heavy fire from the banks
my brains rattled try'n-a contemplate my current fate
the waves splash up over tha side of the lander
pandamonium among the platoon spreads faster than cancer
it seems panic's the answer, but I gotta keep a level head
suddenly a scream an' a cry of pain, another comrad dead
to the motherland..
he's just another, casualty on the statistic spread
as conscripted meds, try to stitch an' mend,
a mortar blast, just misses overhead
suddenly I see a flash an' have a flash of concience thought an' become bothered
what if that was my brother just lost
I start to toil in my emotional blanket,
hopin' an' pray'n for my siblings safety
"god let him be a'ight, save his life an' take me!"
--BEAT STOPS--
--screem of another mortar-- another loud blast--
Fate works in mysterious ways
black wounds turn to spiritless greys
war cries an' torn lives, scourned minds!
makes me almost sorry I died...

Genetikz

The year is 1942, ma phone just rang im one of the selected few//
right on que i turn up to be shipped out to da beaches on the far reach's of da atlantic//
ma heart skips n i start to panic, run around frantic, ima romantic i dont wanna be here//
ma stomach filled wid fear specially for ma brother who i hold so dear, its clear--//
one of us going to die, i call ma mom tell her a whole bunch of lie-s everything's fine//
I ask you sat at home in da warm, have you any inclination of what where going through//
i hate nobody especially you, but i wish it was you going here to die, bro i aint gunna lie//
we transfer to da landing craft, i wish i was aft so when da ramp whent down i wouldent be in da blood bath//
but no such luck, im stuck at the front, fuckin here we go 60 more seconds and ill no//
now i no-- what its like on death row, 60 seconds pass oh so slow, in ma mind i crumble//
i start to fumble for ma sefety switch on ma m67 i whanted one of deese since i was 11//
50 seconds left i look to ma left n see ma brothers landing craft glissaning in the sea spray//
i wanna wave n shout hey, but our eyes just lock n we transfer data like too computers//
both are futeres in-secure, shit look i can see the shore now only 40 seconds left//
staff sergent shoutin orders in ma direction n thats when the bombs start rainin down//
all around us plumes of water thats when i think of ma unborn daughter, hope she's safe//
still its better then her mom tellin her-- baby dads gone to the slaughter//
30 seconds left, i can feal ma heart pounding harder then the bombs, i wonder is it worth hoping//
-- for salvation, but fuck that i just hope for a fast elimination, extermination//
fuck dying for a alien nation who's lands i never walked n bitch's i never stalked//
but thats ma situation, no evasion if i go grazy ma sergant shoots me himself, wish i was an elf//
wid super human powers----- of persuasion to stop this madness on gods green earth//
20 seconds left, ma mind seizes from fear, but i can taste the emotions of those around me//
-- whilst all this mayhem surrounds me, fuckit gods lookin down with a frown on me//
10 seconds left, shits gettin heavy more n more we approach the shore, this like nothin i seen before//
i got no emotions now, im paralized with fear, fuckit i wish i was queer cus they dont get chosen//
struck off nothin to fear for a fuckin queer, im worried now ma life aint flashing before me//
shit gets worse the wether is turning stormy, 0 seconds left, the ramp slams down, i look up//
--- at a bunker goto pull ma trigger in anger qiuke look to ma left see ma brothers boat in flames//
i start calling out random names as i squeeze ma trigger, i snart to snigger, n thats my end//
a peice of shrapnal hits ma left temple, and im left bereft on ma way to gods temple//

hmm, good concept, using D-day and shit, but i think you guys cudda made it betta

yea good concept it coulda been a lil better but its tight shit though

yea, I was doing lines off my desk at work when I wrote this... I could've made it way longer, but topicals ain't my thing ne-way.. nice verse tho zainy// .....

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You both came well....hot shit..flowed nice...uppin this piece

ty fam, ty blunt u 2 dawg,,, lets get some views right here

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LONG WINDED ASS lol

I liked it was nice spit no complaints son

...........this was hot.........Loved both of your verses. Liked the whole concept of D-Day and WW2. THis was a amazing piece props to u BLunt and Props to you Fam UPPIN FOR MY NIGGAS PIECE!~!!!

shit was great i like the word play

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