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Old 07-31-03, 03:09 AM   #1
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droppin some new shit

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haters and shit talkin come hand and hand
ill have u runnin faster than the fuckin gingerbread man
slice your legs clean off, jeans and tims
so tell me how u runnin rap game wit amputated limbs
purple weed fat stacks bringin yall the true facts
export rides like iraq does anthrax
from listenin to tight tracks to burnin the democrats
one look at detroit cats deteriates cataracts
lettin em loose it aight the yayo i free
you think im fucked up but im jsut the dopest MC
the beef, always win leave lyracists to starve
im all up in your grill like a ball park hot dog
hoes stay permanitly like a birthmark partna
phone ring so much i stay straped with a charger
leave you with diseases smell the aroma
my gun so cancerous, it'll give glock-coma

let me know what yall think....peace and love

KEEP IT MUSIC YALL
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Old 07-31-03, 03:18 AM   #2
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aww shit dats tite man
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Old 07-31-03, 09:50 AM   #3
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pretty weak here...lots of improvement needed...shit is mad simple and amuetuer-ess...try reading other peoples shit and get a grasp on how to up ya skills...is all i can tell ya
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Old 07-31-03, 11:09 AM   #4
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seemed forced, you used very simple words to rhyme which took away from it, and i didn't really see a purpose to the drop...you could improve in many ways..........
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