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Old 07-13-03, 04:35 PM   #1
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Crystal Clear

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Quik 10 line Peice,jus gettin shit off ma chest.

Whats crystal clear is all tha iraqi's livin in fear,it's so far away but it seems so very near/
i shed a tear,saddam control's every radio and tv channel brainwashin his people so's they always hear/
also in this world there's so much hate,it seems like these dictators map our fate,george bush,tony blair usin bin ladin as world war baite/
they must learn to appreciate all tha harm mother nature and people have suffered to date and learn to not discriminate/
in tha streets it's learn to hook not to pick up a book,lives are so precious but nowadays needlesly took/
what we need to do is revaluate our ways of thought and not look back to tha past coz of course it's already been shook/
why are ballers and tv personalties livin with so much wealth,when one in three peeps in africa are sufferin from hiv and dwindling health/
where are tha worlds priorites,why do we racially abuse and mock our minorities/
that said theres also so much beauty in this ungodly place,we shouldn't deface,we should improve and slow our evolutionary pace/
coz if we continue to live in disgrace,judge charactor by race and not on moral base we surely will be caught up and lose our lifelong chase/
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Old 07-13-03, 05:51 PM   #2
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alot of feelings about that shit in here
i liked it i know how it feels to just wanna get shit
off of your chest .........good job!!!!!!
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Old 07-13-03, 06:00 PM   #3
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^^^word...I have seen this piece and indeed it was good...
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Old 07-13-03, 06:21 PM   #4
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TIGHT WEST BUT I EXPECT NO LESS
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Old 07-13-03, 06:27 PM   #5
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tight piece most definitely thun
very thought provoking
kinda came off like a hardcore poem
but anyways, nice job on this piece
props
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Old 07-13-03, 09:07 PM   #6
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Uppin peeps.
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Old 08-01-03, 11:09 AM   #7
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ZZZZZZZZZzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.........
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Old 08-01-03, 11:25 AM   #8
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This was nice... flows well... was feelin' the concepts in this post...

'in tha streets it's learn to hook not to pick up a book,lives are so precious but nowadays needlesly took/'

Shit was on point... I was feelin' this...
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