i aint gotta rap about tities and ass coach bags-n- gucci glasses i rather spit about personal catastro-phes/
i battle these actors with ease i rap against other femcees they just to simple for me/
the plain jane they only make stains i want to permanent press/
i wanna cause lung failure , think about me when you curl and caress/
i havent seen another female on this site yet,and i love that/
they only know how to fuk the mic and me i hug rap/
handle that i double back i never apologize/
a no thanks to hand shakes when i get no claps not suprised/
cuz most guys say ya so so , what you fold for/
ya good for a girl anyway catch this cold sore/
i spit hot i spit cold so it dont matter to my personal likeness/
i get critiqued no matter what measure it occured wit my dykeness/
im the nicest in this gender of rap,handle that/
only difference i spill blood, and i only smear wit a pap/
jack

This Was Wack...You Really Need To Elevate, Especially On The Following:

.Flow
.Vocab.
.Wordplay
.Gettin Words To Rhyme
.Structure

i havent seen another female on this site yet, how long you been here..5 seconds!!!

yeah this was subpar by far... take more time with whut you write, you'll be suprized at how your mind will adjust tha flow...

keep writing...

^^Yuck......
lol.....Well now that u've seen me i guess im the first femcee you've seen on the site......haha....................

Elevate on everything....

overall....2/10

lol yea this Was pretty wack but you a tru newb so immaa give you that

elevate on everything go to Wackness emergency center thread

learn some shit there

and yo slik that stuff about special olimpics and shit thats super funny

no beef just reality