Hook::K0r3: Pyromania--// Bring the pain to ya--// give me a match or a lighter put a flame on ya--// set a house on fire put the blame on ya--// its Pyromania a way to maintain the rush//


V1.
K0r3::my passion for rappin has no comparison to lightin sum shit ablaze//
from matches to hot wax-its endless the amount of ways//
I Just love the rush when I light some brush//
Leaves ashes whiter than an elephants tusk//
From dawn to dusk you can find me in my field//
Lightin' shit on fire I don't care if it's a banana peel//
As long as it makes a flame I can touch and feel//
then youll hear me fuckin squeal//
the smoke gets in my eyes but that don't make me tear//
it's the sheer love I share for the flame its like my cure//
whenever I feel down I just find a colorin book wit clowns//
and quickly frowns turn to smiles as the paper browns and burns into the ground//
in schoo all I do is day dream of ice cream and how the flame gleams//
and it seems it clears my mind clears all of the voices and the silent screams//
in my dreams I have wings and paper and a lighter//
wait is that the creed dude singin (Can you take me higher)//
I'm in the pyro's heaven where shit a flames the only weapon//
Where watchin 2 fires go is like watchin professional wrestlin'//
A constant competition to see whos the fastest spread and the strongest//
Or whos ballistic blaze lasts the longest//
Fire without you id be fuckin crazy//
Fire when I light you its like makin a baby//

Hook::Krimzen:Its da.....Mania of da pyros// fire hos, and black smokin clothes// Fire is what it all about yo, so dont b frontin cuz, deep inside ya no//Fuck gas ill lite ya ass, and watch ya burn ta ash// Its Pyromania a way to maintain da rush//

V.2
Krimzen::All i need is a nutch, some papa, and toxic fumes//
Gas or oil, spread it all around, lyte it and watch me blow up da whole damn room//
Its a certain rush u get, when u watch the flames switch//
Hit up da box hitch, and watch sparks fly all ova da shit//
Red, orange, and yello, risin from da duplex of fires//
Neva put da shit out, feed it more, make it go higher//
I dont give a fuck were i b at, i could b any where and still lite of da yack//
When im around, bitches betta step back, cuz ders no tellin what i could do wit just one match//
Fuck, when i die, imma b thrilled ta go down ta hell//
Me and Satan sendin yo rotin corpse in da fite, den sit back in chill//
The flames illuminating glow sets ones mind in a trance//
Excapen me, u got no chance, one glance, ill lit a match in ya pants, and den watch and laf is u do some corny ass dance//
I sleep, eat, dream, and think of fire, so im pretty sure im affected by heat//
I gots hot feet, i suggest u dont fall asleep, cuz u'll b wakein up to an ash pit, 6 feet deep//
Im lyk a dragon, spit fire and breath smoke//
On da mic I'll leave ya 2 choke, da shit fillin up ya throat, any minute now and u readin to croak//
Just one clap, and it all lit lyk dat, not knowin what hit u 'till ya get smacked//
Da fire and smoke bringin it 2 ya chest lyk an asthma attack//

Hook(combined)


dis waz my first open mic, so holla back wit some feedback............*peace*

I seen a couple multiez up in the 1st hook...but I don't know where they went for the verse...but the flow was nice and you stuck to the subject throughout the track...vocab was aiiight...coulda been iller but it sufficed...but overall nice drop...I'd give it a 7.5/10

uppin for feedback

overall a decent read not impressed but not depressed i read it i t was there and better then most shit i read but needed multi's and better structure

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yo we still uppin holla 1

nice drop,stayed on point through out tha piece,stay blazin,~1~