HOOK: it aint that im weeded im conceided-
cocky- rappers with athletes trying to jock me-
aint nothing gonna stop me-i do this for sport-
any m.c. diss me and left looken like he lost a battle to TOO SHORT-

i FOUND my style now...so i got nothing to LOOSE-
for me spitten this cums as easy as leaving a retard cofused-
IM A cruel joke.....like blind kids with rubix cubes-
spit the slick shit and brush my teeth with anal lube-
at 400 degrees who the illest m.c. to leave fakes indignent-
believe my rhymes hot enough to alter your skin pigment-
to ill to catch measils-
this dickhead surrounded by more pussies then VEN DIESEL-
but im tighter then 90 percent of these virgins-
you already fucked...in battles my first bars just me flirten-
wanna TEST CENTZ......let's EXAM-
the mind of a xx over xx chromosone-
on microphone~ maken me the MAN-
LYRICAL BEWILDERING,BIBLICAL KILLING,CYNICAL AND WILLING-
machine-with tongue sharper then guilletenes-
im severing...everything-anything if it gets within my grasp-
in my path-it gets passed-like grade "A" mustard gas-
have CALCULOUS students drop class- when i drop math-
try to sustain-the un sleign-
verbal lord who reign-
wanna SPIT plain-
KNOWLEDGE use your GAG REFLEX while given me BRAINS-
who ami ? no need for names-
but get the picture when you get ripped out the frame-
get it?
you got potential but i spit it kinetic-
the amnesia of rap...you seeing me forget it-
i'll be deasd before i ghostwrite so fuck your credit and debit-
im located as the illest on any map-
spit dimes- so i get mines- you go on~line-
and download my cd` for free `still getting taxed-
get it straight you cant rap-cant act-it's just fact-
you wack-
write with a hyperdermic needle in you maybe you can flow atleat on one track-

HOOK: it aint that im weeded im conceided-
cocky- rappers with athletes trying to jock me-
aint nothing gonna stop me-i do this for sport-
any m.c. diss me and left looken like he lost a battle to TOO SHORT-

i rock earlobes-across the globe-expose-
you see through like MADONNAS WARDROBE-
CENTZ IS THE PRO
PROlific PROfessional asshole-
shit on m.c.'s notebooks my toilet papr with area codes- as a commode-
trust me you dont want it im twice ill when i switch tempo-
rip[ your favorite 16 albums on an 8~track demo-
in 3 verse unleashen tsunamis,tornados, and hurricane-
let me explain-
one flow is h20 bringin mansoons and flooding rain-
i created everything...the b.c. of genisis-
destroy anything- the A,D, of exodus-
a genius with linguis HIGHER the THC contents in canibus-
wanna band WAGON? STATION railroaders will hate-
my minds TRAINed to rip on TRACKS across the UNITED STATES-
SO DONT BLINK- DONE EVEN ACTIVATE THE NERVE TO THINK-
im the PLUMMER of your flow... to clogged to spit IN~SINK-
spit it with clarity,density,intensity, my parities-worth qouting-
leave you soaking-your girl deep throating-haters self loathing-
sware to hell- i dick ride myself- think im joking-
who the illest M.C....me
my favorite lyrically and verbally....me
who flawless with physical and lkyrical form me x3-
the square root of the illest is M.K.C-
preach what i teach-the virus cant be breached capeach?
if you in this for the lute...i'll leave everyone of your presidents impeached.

HOOK: it aint that im weeded im conceided-
cocky- rappers with athletes trying to jock me-
aint nothing gonna stop me-i do this for sport-
any m.c. diss me and left looken like he lost a battle to TOO SHORT-

first off..what was conceited supposed to rhyme wit?..in the hook..

anyways..this was ight..best thing ive read on here so far..flow was ight..some long lines..is this audio intended?..if not..no need for a hook..showed cockiness..but was more along the lines of an all person diss..thought it would be more..im this and im that..multis were ight..honestly i thought ur shit would be better than this..considering ur post count..and i think ive seen ur name before on some other sites..not a bad read..but not what i expected..

and for some reason..i keep think n ive read half ur 1st verse before somewhere..could just be me..

what would you change and conceided and weeded wree the scheme

UPPIN

this drop was tight had good vocab and multis i just couldnt relate to the theme that much but i guess it wasnt meant for me to relate to any way my favorite line was :spit it with clarity,density,intensity, my parities-worth qouting-
leave you soaking-your girl deep throating-haters self loathing-
sware to hell- i dick ride myself- think im joking-
i felt that shit left me like got damn any way keep spitting
one

THANK YOU YOU DONT KNOW HOW YOU JUST MADE MY DAY

nice drop man...8/10 for sure check my shyt out...the ways of the world...keep spitten man an yo i wonna do a calab witchu if thats cool juz pm me if you want peace man

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THNX UPPIN....GIVE ME 2 WEEKS IM LEAVING TO GO TO ITALY ONCE IGET SET UP THERE I WILL BE BACK AND I'D BE HAPPY TO COLLAB YOU GOT MAD TALENT TWIN