[verse 1: Bash]
Just clappin , I know you're wondering what's Happening
Ur Brain getting filled wit all the Disasterous Stuff
we can walk with our eyes closed , because we know in our hearts GOD leads the way
but my life gets so dark that sometimes I can't see my hand two inches infront of my face
thinking of past decisions I wanted to make
so many different positions I wanted to take
but it takes a real cat like me to learn from my mistakes
In the name of the father, the son, and the holy spirit...
The voice of God, The touch of Jesus, when silence speaks I'm the only one who hears it
this Earth is getting overshadowed by all the disturbed disasters!
While my Beliefs grow stronger and stronger in the invisible barrier
Use this Microscope too Elope my untouchable Carrier
Take a Perfect 3 shots too my Dome
I know that God's right next too me , But Yet I still feel like I'm alone...
One step too depth
One Rep till Death
I'm Glad too say that my Pen and my NotePad is all I got Left

Chorus:
We been through Hard Times and good Times
People commiting suicides and crimes
Every night trying too release my pain wit these rhymes that i write
One Love , One Fight , One god from up above
One Dove , One Fright , Lil ones suffering because they're starving at night
Friendships , and Relationships
One crip too domestic Flicks
When I die , Will I go too Heaven or Hell?
I can't make a choice , Because only God can Tell

[verse 2: Slik]
Life Can Be Hard, But Open Yo Thoughts Like It Was A-Bday-Card [Bash - Yeah]
Express What You Really Feel, Cuz Mentallity Tears-You-Apart
Its Only The Start, You Meet Friends, But You Find-Them-Knarks
Take Life Day By Day, Make Sure Its Worth While When-You-Stay
Get On Yo Knees-And-Pray, Theres More To Life Then-Being-Laid
Yall Think Yo Gangsta, But You Cant Understand Lifes Real Pain
Each Day You Wanna Give Up, Dont, Can You Imagine Life-In-Cuffs
When Its Seems To Like To Much, Take It, Cuz Life-Is-Enough
Life Consists Of The Fast Lane, Too Much Make You Loose Yo Sane
So Many BitchesComplain, But Its Always Yo Fault Noone To Blame
You Wish You Had Fame, But Its Not Ur's Until You Make The Claim
So Instead Of Living Off Other Peoples Dreams, Make-It-Happen
Cuz In The End, Its Going To Be More Than You Just-Clappin

My verse was quick...Look out for Hard Times [PT.2] . I will comeout sicker on dat one..

It wassallritte had pretty good flow, It needs a chorus,,,,,though good drop comin forom both of yall keep it up........................................

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Whats the point of living?

The voices in my head Feat. Rule

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More Comming soon!

Thanks......I'm a put a chorus in there

upping

Good ish right here felt it.

Rhyming/Flow
Was Hott By Both Catz, Although I Felt That Silk Took It, But Bash Wasn't Far Behind. You Both Had Mad MUlti's In Your Verses,..Fav Line BASH: "thinking of past decisions I wanted to make
so many different positions I wanted to take"

Fav Line Silk: "Each Day You Wanna Give Up, Dont, Can You Imagine Life-In-Cuffs
When Its Seems To Like To Much, Take It, Cuz Life-Is-Enough" ...8/10

Vocab/Wordplay
Both Had Killa Vocab....You Used The Right Words Inorder To Get Your Own View n' Feelin's Across...8/10

Concept/Topic
The Content Sort-Of Reminded Of "Religiois Atheist" Cos You Were Both - Bash Especially - Rappin' ABout religion. Silk Howver Took The mORE Povity Striken Approach, But You Both Stayed On The Topic And PLayed It Well..9/10

Overall
8/10, I Felt Silk Came OUt Stronger Here, But You Both Had Good Verse's, The Hook Was Tight, Really Corresponded To The Rest Of The Song....Brutal!

Word

yes reality rap i love that , life is about pain and personal struggles realife emcees express that,,,

Thanks

Nice Verse...I Liked Tha Flow Good Vocab 2..I Felt This Pieace

upping

lol bash i didnt even know you dropped yet......hahahaa..........


anyways uppin thanks fo all the replies......

Reminder To All Emcees......

Look out fo B.R.E's Anthem (Remix) Gonna Be HOTT........

Ight..........Uppin again

Yo This Was Nice...Flow Was Good But Basically I Agree Wit What Rythmic Said...The Vocab And Concept Were Both Very Nice...Good Shit You Dropped Here...Liked Reading It...

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FLOW
it was hott by both yall i was really feeling ya both, to bad it wasnt longer tho the flow really keept me into it

WORDPLAY
ur vocab n wordplay was jus damn (thas all i can say) ya both used the best words in jus the right spots to get ur point n view across

TOPIC
ya both used a rieligious kinda theme goin on but it was good u showed ur point n u kept it under control

OVERAL
i give ya a 9/10 it was a nice drop on both ur parts

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