A Landmark,that will end up in History/
Morning was calm,Sea was glistening/
We had no signs of Terror,too late to realize it/
On a day that my parents spent 19 years united/
Turned out to be a day of destruction,a day of grief/
A day that made people never wake up,if they fell asleep/
A day that will live in what others want it to be/
A day that we were a powerful nation,to practically/
A nation upon its knees,physically losin itself/
We had warnings before,but they were all shelfed/
Weren't taken seriously, nothing went into accord/
We asked for too much,a thousand lives we can't afford/
Now they buried,deep in the ground, are they resting in Peace?/
Or are their ghosts cryin out, just waitin to leave?/
This wasn't expected,a major change in our life/
To all the countries we've attacked,now we know what its like/

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aight check this...

aight subject kinda played

also...ok flow..good meaning...

but u fell off some times just to keep ur flow up

but other than that a avrage open mic
keep trying

i liked that...i came on this site way after all this happened so to me this is a new topic...i liked the flow...an the emotion...your ending bar i thought was a great way to end kinda unexspected but left wit a train of thoughts...i felt it was good but to short...7/10 but yo if you can do me a favour an check myn out..."different teritorial flow" that'd be apreciated pez

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461