10 lines max
no dickryde/bias/hate votes
no playin off of verses
due date tonight by midnight...

peace
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checkin in

let's try to get dis done within da hour

let's do dis

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My flow can’t be contained, break through your "rib-cage" and make your "lungs" wet/
Smoka strikes out with girls, can’t be "French" that’s why he always "tongue-less"//
Rhymes are old they never get noticed except when u change lines to bold/
U shooting-blanks, so when I’m hit, like virgins having sex u can’t find-the-hole//
I spit flames when I face you, that’s the reason my rhymes never back-fire/
Shit in a bulls-eye I’m untouchable, u couldn’t "find-your-mark" even if you "tracked-tires"//
Text is cold and chilly, every-time u enter tournaments you known blown-it/
Cause like "Duncan" missing the final shot, u always fail at the "Spur-of-the-moment"//
Your skills "can’t be found" like "tracing evidence" on "hacked sites"/
My losses and wins are even, u'll try to sway priests to vote just so they can bap-ties//

ur turn

uppin 4 dis nigga to spit damn taken all day

only took me 18 min 4 mine

hope ur not pre-writtin

my bad yo...i thought we had agreed to do this by midnight tonight....i didn't read this after i made it i got off...i'll post ASAP....

peace
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if this bitch stood beside "LIL JON" he wouldn't be "KRUNK", ur SOFTER than "dying TREE TRUNKS"//
i'll "chase u through a FOREST" u need to "listen to JENNY" and "pick up the speed GUMP"(Run Forest Run!!....lmao)//

i'll leave u in more "SPASMS" than a "DEMON" who "seen MONKS", if u were a "CARPENTER" with a "HOOKER" u wouldn't "NAIL" close//
this kid has "attempted PUNCHES" like a "BOXER with ARTHIRITIS in his ELBOWS",like "TRIPPIN PROSTITUTES" u "FAILED HOE" (fell)//

u got "TIGHTER SHIT" than a "PRISON INMATES BITCH", like "feedin PIDGEONS IN JETS" ur "PRECISION EMULATES SHIT"//
don't "THINK TOO HARD" cuz ur "DECISION'S STIMULATES DICKS", i'll "STICK TO YA WORSE" than "SLIMY BOOGERS U CAN'T FLICK"//

ur as TALL as an ANT'S DICK, my rhymes are "ILLEGAL IN AMERICA" and it seems i'm workin with "TWO MINDS" like a "SCHIZOPHRANTIC HISPANIC'S" antics//
u wouldn't "ROCK THIS WORLD" if u "had ur own PLANET", i'll "GET ON UR NERVERS" worse than "DEEP CUTS"//

ur stupider than a PIMP WHO NEEDS SLUTS, like a "BUTCHER SHOP IN BOSTON" this kid "MEAT'S BUTTS"//(Boston Butt & Meet)
i'll make sure u don't sleep much, like a "WHORE'S MOUTH ON DRUMS" ur "BEAT'S SUCK", this kid is so "MUCH OF A FAGGOT he UNZIPS HIS OWN PANTS" to "FREE NUTS"//

took me about 13 minutes....sorry for the waste of time yo...i got off earlier homie....

peace
4:20

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uppin this shit for some votes......this is my first uppin.....nice verse from u though DJ....the last one i battled sucked....lol....

peace
4:20

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This was a nice battle guys

But smoka had uppa hand with his structure flow and wordplay

He had some nice punches goin on tooo

Vote SMoka

You hit my 2 battles up there a few down

aight coo.....i'll go check yo shit homie.....anyway....keep votin peoples..........

peace
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I'll give the edge to Joka cuz of his relentles wordplay and complex punches...

The other cat came close, as he brought wordplay as well...
Punched nicely...

But I'm leanin towards Joka for the complexity.

Everything else was about even.

Peace

Holla back...
Born to Kill vs. HooDz

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http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=71226

hit that up then i will hit this up when ur done aight

Smoka got this one

this kid has "attempted PUNCHES" like a "BOXER with ARTHIRITIS in his ELBOWS",like "TRIPPIN PROSTITUTES" u "FAILED HOE" (fell)//

hahahaha that shit was funny very good line aight

Vote=SMOKAJOKA666

aight coo...uppin for a second time......two more and we can get this shit rid of.....

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yes he did i'm gonna have to go wit dj

he had the better overall verse 2 me

harder punches and more complex

vote=dj krunk

uppin 4 sum votes

damn smoka i know u pre-writ dat it took u atleast 5 hours

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uppin

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