ok check in
10-15 lines
no crew no hate no b/s no biting ususal rules and good luck

intro:
i read ur copy and paste it, they like the brady bunch, bitch they make me laugh
dont worry youll get ur break kid, when i lay a punch, and you break in half

ill slay first, even spit a line from a played verse
and get high off ur ashes flammed in a blassed hearst
i can make this biscuit limp like fred dursk
dudes gay, walks a round in a tutu rockin a pink purse
watch the c4 blow up and see ur soul rise in smoke
u gotta reputation? imma be the one that make ur rep get revoked
and im the one to make ur fruity ass choke, get so scared, heart beats so fast u have first and last sroke
i wish you had a mic, so i could hear you mumble and stumble, while my voice makes a zues like rumble that breaks stone
ull be like jack and jill and ill watch you tumble down and groan, i no you cant get pussy, but dude leave ur mom alone
youve been told lies now let me tell you what the truth is
your somthin not want on the RB like ray lewis

finish:
this is it now, cock my glock see what it spits out, ull be what it hits ouch, ill unleash atleast six rounds

nice drop kid, ok (slaps him with the mic over his head)
look look
ill drop a keystyle blow away any of ur prewritten frestyles, all the peices put in piles
when u get back on in a lil while, feelin invaded lookin for 911, but for get what to dial
amazingly with the crack of my toung ur rung, hung over, rippin out ur loung
ignorant at what ya done, leave ya lickin up ur pereiod blood like its a cinabun
this kats as wack as Taxi cab confessions
so sit and relax chap ima teach u a lesson
ur bars run like a frozen pipe, stuck under the surface
no way to heat em up cuz it sounds like ur wack on purpose
ill leave ur nose cold and runny, and ur body old and bloody like a used tampon
at krogers in the fast-route, i got u bout to tap out cuz im readin u like a scantron
inteligently i have u beaten, delinquently uve been cheaten
ur friends lied to ya, you aint good, so theres no reason for u reachen
ur worst then that fat kid in last comic standing who lost in the last round
like ur wasted off beer, cuz this is wastin my time, ill leave ya passed out on the ground

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uppin for votes now............................................... .................................................. ...

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dont let this get slept on......................need some honest votes...............................uppin

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mc-vote

first post and he beat you bro

punches and flow/ little choppy but hes better then some people that have like 60 posts

so yea good job 2both but i gotta give this to mc