Dedicated to this female Linzy- holla at u gurl...
and fellas use this if u want when u haven troubles wit a girl or if u want a gurl feel free to use it but dun bite it thanks...


Hey baby, tell me that we belong together/
And I'll make it that way, I'll be yours forever/
I look into your eyes and I can't find myself/
I love you so much it's not kind to my health/
But don't worry about me I'm sure it will pass/
The infatuation with you and that tight lil' ass/
But you got class baby and style for days/
You could make straight men out of fifty gays/
I'm in a nifty daze i can't beleive you're all mine/
Lovin' you so much that i will by you the fall line/
Of calvin klein just think you'll be oh so fine/
How I landed you just blows so many minds/
Any time you get unhappy with me let me know/
I never want it to get to where you let me go/
But I know you want me too baby at least i hope/
Cuz you got me defenseless, back against the rope/
This isn't a love song, but more of a dove song/
And baby I know I'm right, I'm glad I'm above wrong/
This is a little verse to let you know just, how I feel/
Don't think i'm playing with you, you know, now it's real/

yo this would be a sweet song n shit , deepish......


good shit keep it up

i wanted to spit shit thats not played out away from gangsta shit and otha shit thanks for da reply nigga

yea all that "IM A GANGSTA IMMA FUCKING KILL YOUR FAMILY"

shit kinda of gets boring

see that shit in life and i come to see rhymes not egos

Thats some nice shit.Strays from tha ordinary.Nice nice

good emotion in there man..i liked the flow it was a nice read keep it up pz

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thanks for da feed back
UPPIN
for some more

feelin it feelin it.

hey that was a good verse. you should finish it. i like it

thanks still uppin for feedback

niiice! good flow...

thanks UPPIN

B.T.W this was dedicated to a gurl named Linzy