Dude ducked me... so here is my verse.. feedback

... im gonna have to be Blunt, this kid sucks &.. well
no one likes Stems, so i'll Weed him out & give him the L
it aint hard to tell.. this kid will tap out w/ his phoney advances
cause him beating my Rap now is worse then Kobe's Chances
as he slowly dances around the fact that he just not d.o.p.e
& the only time he can ever hang w/ me is.. neck in rope
what do you expect, he knows.. checked in w/ Respect & Clout
now he has Nothing to Show for it like Tyson's Checking Account
X'ing him out for accepting this bout & expecting to win.. plus, homie
Calls himself an MC.. so i locked Stem in a Cell for trying to Clone ME
leave him lonely, but its aight.. by now, dude should be use to it
Sized him up, Tailored the Abuse to fit.. perectly Suiting this Bitch
forget losing it, the battle was lost as soon as you viewed this shit
forced to leave this Pussy's Mind Mastered like it was Looped w/ Clits
your Crew's the Pits, just a Group of kids w/ no proof they exist
but the truth of this is.. if you left today, do you think you'd be missed??
definately not.. your not hot, just stop & see what your facing stem
& i swear to God im deleting my verse if he posts his 2 as usual....
1 verse of played punches & another explainin them

Feedback

DAWG PERSONALLY I LIKE THIS YOUR STYLE AND NAME SEAM MAD FAMILIAR TO ME . IM FEELING THE WHOLE PEACE THOUGH.

... im gonna have to be Blunt, this kid sucks &.. well
no one likes Stems, so i'll Weed him out & give him the L
THAT WAS A HELL OF A WAY TO INTRO THE VERSE.

Sized him up, Tailored the Abuse to fit.. perectly Suiting this Bitch
forget losing it, the battle was lost as soon as you viewed this shit
forced to leave this Pussy's Mind Mastered like it was Looped w/ Clits
WELL COMPOSED I WOULD LIKE TO SEE MORE FROM YOU IF YOU LIKE MAYBE A COLLAB ME AND YOU TO YOUR TOPIC OF CHOICE NEVER THE LESS THIS WAS A GREAT READ AND WORTH UPPPIN PEEP MY ORDO ABCHO TRACK WITH NOE BRAINER

Appreciated

I Hate Posting Open Mics... People Treat Them Like Closed Mics

hahaha no wonder dude ducked you nice vocab, flow, everything. pure venom

ive already told u man....straight wack!

i know... let me apologise again... sorry

i really didn't like it that much....
word posted this:
... im gonna have to be Blunt, this kid sucks &.. well
no one likes Stems, so i'll Weed him out & give him the L

that sucked...

^^ Fuck outta here

That was one of tha craziest verses i seen in a long time..
To bad he ducked it.. good shit 9/10

Word, they're all battling fresh meat to up thier pathetic battle record....

this was a nice nice nice verse... it's a shame it went to waste.. especially in the Heavyweight title match...

ok


... im gonna have to be Blunt, this kid sucks &.. well
no one likes Stems, so i'll Weed him out & give him the L

ok opener starts tha flo rollin good..

it aint hard to tell.. this kid will tap out w/ his phoney advances
cause him beating my Rap now is worse then Kobe's Chances

lol beatin his rap....nice punch

as he slowly dances around the fact that he just not d.o.p.e
& the only time he can ever hang w/ me is.. neck in rope

^^ok so ur sayin u hang wit ur neck in a rope too...didnt like that

what do you expect, he knows.. checked in w/ Respect & Clout
now he has Nothing to Show for it like Tyson's Checking Account

lol sick punch

X'ing him out for accepting this bout & expecting to win.. plus, homie
Calls himself an MC.. so i locked Stem in a Cell for trying to Clone ME

another good punch

leave him lonely, but its aight.. by now, dude should be use to it
Sized him up, Tailored the Abuse to fit.. perectly Suiting this Bitch

^^^sickest line so far wordplay was redamndiculous..minus 1 F lol

forget losing it, the battle was lost as soon as you viewed this shit
forced to leave this Pussy's Mind Mastered like it was Looped w/ Clits

lol ur wordplay is dope so far shits heatin up

your Crew's the Pits, just a Group of kids w/ no proof they exist
but the truth of this is.. if you left today, do you think you'd be missed??

^^^kind of a filler but hey it works...herbs loool

definately not.. your not hot, just stop & see what your facing stem
& i swear to God im deleting my verse if he posts his 2 as usual....

^^is he falling off for tha closer???????.................

1 verse of played punches & another explainin them

^^ LMAO hell no looks like he ripped'em head to toe

sick verse its too bad tha other dude didnt post would of been nice to see if he could have kept up...but i guess even he knew it prolly wasnt gonna happen

yup

Appreciated all reply's. I posted cause i hate wasting verses.

I'm not likin E... BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO...


Naw what's up dunny... I'm not likin the verse though... but still