10-15 lines
u drop first
no crew votes
no d/r votes
nice clean fite
...pc

checks in....lets get started now...

if u dont post withing 10 minutes of mines u automatically lose...

Newbie goin In Lyrical Cardiac~Arrest, He Really Gone Need~Help...
Cuz I Let My sixteen Shellz "Strap Around Ya~ Chest", Like a "Seatbelt"...
U issuing Challenges to me, Is Like commiting suicide, or self~Execution...
Only way You'll Beat it, Is If "Video~Games" commited~Insane, In "Mental~Institutions"...
You Prepared to Lose, Or Fate? Dawg It aint Gone Be Me they~Blame...
I'm Playing Max~Payne driving Down "Mental Street", till i drive this "Game~Insane"...
Homeboy Not a Baller, Pockets Juss Gets Thinner Along~Wit~Him...
Hes a "Paper Chaser" like running after "Printers on Calistectic~Systems"...
In These Streets, I'm Mutant Muh'fucka, consider Me~Marvel...
Cuz I'ma "Dare Devil" Plus I hit "Bulls Eye" on all My Targets...
You not fuckin wit Trav, Homey Thas a Word~To~The~Wise...
When I'm havin "No Struggle Wit Him" like "Prisoners Raping Gay~Guys"...
They ask How I smoke Weed, But thinkin Of Always Hurtin~Herbs~First...
Cuz' Herbs~Always~Cop~Pleas, And GAME~INSANES another one who~got~Murked...

Next?

ATTENTION...

NO SHOW...THATS A D.Q, I NEED A MOD 2 VARIFY...IT HAS BEEN 2 HOURS AND HE STILL HASNT POSTED...

aite i had a virus on my comp i talk to u over aim..so u coo about it
TrAv2DreaMz: iono...hurry up
^^so ill hurry up..check in....
give em a few minutes.. im startin

COO verse..>BUT HERES HEAT>KID


Game~INsane GEt-beat? fuck naw, im bringin-heat//
hit you wit bars til ya neck 'breaks' just like ya winning-streak.//.
Go fucking practice, this is what you should be heading for//
Try and spit a punchline that I haven’t said before//
you fake, read my verse, learn-about-real-shit//
packin burners-wit-steel-grips, so sick i got a fuckin terminal-illness//
The “quotes” and-the-dashes (kid, it just doesn’t fit)//
You can’t pronounce any of that bull shit when you spit//
It’s pointless; just go practice how you’re writing a sentence//
If people can’t figure it out when they hear it, it aint nice to begin with//
You’re shit aint complicated, just really redundant//
i spit malignant verses that have u diein slow like cancer//
his sexuality? like the 76ers witout allen, he aint got the answer//
quit botherin-me, cant rap properly, get jacked like arm-robbery//
got this 'Newb" shook' like muhammad-ali...

uppin 4 sum more votes/////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
I MERKED THIS FOOL

UPPPP'NNNN FORRR VOOTTEESS!!!!!!!!


WE NEEED MORE VOTES 2 CLOSE THE BATTLE!!

where the votes...up'n

Go fucking practice, this is what you should be heading for//
Try and spit a punchline that I haven’t said before//
you fake, read my verse, learn-about-real-shit//
packin burners-wit-steel-grips, so sick i got a fuckin terminal-illness//
The “quotes” and-the-dashes (kid, it just doesn’t fit)//
You can’t pronounce any of that bull shit when you spit//
It’s pointless; just go practice how you’re writing a sentence//
If people can’t figure it out when they hear it, it aint nice to begin with//
^^^^^^nice wordplay an punches good mid tro

Homeboy Not a Baller, Pockets Juss Gets Thinner Along~Wit~Him...
Hes a "Paper Chaser" like running after "Printers on Calistectic~Systems"...
In These Streets, I'm Mutant Muh'fucka, consider Me~Marvel...
Cuz I'ma "Dare Devil" Plus I hit "Bulls Eye" on all My Targets...
You not fuckin wit Trav, Homey Thas a Word~To~The~Wise...
When I'm havin "No Struggle Wit Him" like "Prisoners Raping Gay~Guys"...
^^^good shitlmao at then last one
punches=tie
personals= Game
mechanics=Travo
Wordplay=Game
mULTIES=TIE WAST MANNY
FLOW=TIE BOTH WERE NICE

VOTE gaEM INSANE
GOOD BATTLE CLOSE TO THE LAST LINE

uppin on thisd shit
^^^ coo thanks
for da feedbak
good battle travo
props
uppin for a few mote votes to end this shit

this was a nice battle....both had good flow...good disses....
iight trav-o had some nice punches only thing is they did'nt hit that hard....no ooh's and ahh's... wordplay was iight...creativity was iight also...

Game came nice with punches....felt that he had a lil more heat cause he played off trav-o verse pretty nicely without makin it that obvious...had a couple good oneliners that hit hard also...you both came off nice as newcomers tho but to me Game edge this battle .... vote G.I!

Good Battle...


Upp'n... Let's Get this Shit Going...Taking to long to Finish battle............

foreal good battle dawg
props too ya shit
u got skill
maybe we ll get a round 2 when we both elelevate in a few weeks
uppin go peep me n 2 hot 2 handle

^^^exactly