10 to 16 lines max
no d/r votes
no crew votes
no hata votes
must spit today uk time, its 16:09 p.m. now.

Check in and Good luck.

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I'll be sure to post today

yo it says i'm OFFLINE
but that's cuz i'm under invisible
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check it yo yo check it!

Mortality is name full of facily, faulse with no pulse stuck outside of reality,
Manually, i'll flip ya all latrially, cuz you thinking of winning this battle is all imaginary.

I'll take you out just ta hear ya shout, no doubt, cuz when ya come at me ya lightweight with no clout.
Your gonna loose this bout, cuz im rippin ya skills and im tearin em out, i'll leave you sour like a crout.

Your a pussy, wet and aching for cock your soppy with ya flow and your beebs got no bop,
I could twist you up like ya guts after spice and the only way you flow ill is in the john when you drop.

This is hop hop not shawady waday wop so why off beat and stoppin with no stops,
I see you square dancing on ya nights off, thats when hit ya with my scripture and teach ya how ta box. (square dancing-boxing)

You need cleaning up your a bum which got faught I watched on the internet as you got taught, (bum fights)
Could you stand up in court cuz ya bound to apeal when I win the battle we just faught.

Why you comin to me for an X-plan-ation of how to beat vets real quick and be real patient?
Cuz im the one who gives you loosin sensations like when you dont cum good after vigarous masturbation.

Face it you've gone soft cuz this battle you've lost and you might aswell switch before I turn ya lights off,
Cuz you step up to me i'll leave you damaged and your already flowing thin like 3 worlders in a famine.

You a bitch and a snitch green and envious like the grintch and to win this battle would be ya last wish,
but its tough this time cuz ya battlin 4REAL and if the prize was money you couldnt get rich quick.

Yo pretty weak but it should be ok........

This fuckin faggit talkin shit when he "Sucks Cocks" stickes 10 dildo's for lunch in his "Lunch Box", This bitch dont wanna fuck with me cuz i "Tuck Glocks" this kid spit so many wack lines cuz he "Smokes Rocks"//
My punches knockin away this bitches "Vision" only pleasure he gets is when another man is "Jizzin", Punchlines hittin this dumb fuck with hard "Collisions" XL look at ya verse man you really need some "Revisions"//
Your not ILL so "Give It Up" your the wackest herb on this site so "Live It Up", It's my turn to merk your ass so i got the mic and i'm bout ta "Spin It Up" I'm Killin you and takin a win that i'm "Spittin Up"//

Look at your shit it wouldn't matter if it was "Hand Writtin" cuz it came out "Wack Spittin", Your Puncheslines came at me with "Weak Hittin" to me that verse dont exist it's bein "Forgettin"//
I'm like a bully i'm takin ya "In-Come" if ya got some good lines why dont u "Spit-Some", Dont suck anymore dick so u dont "Spit-Cum" fuck it you aint worth "Shit-Bum"//
This kids a fake fuckin "Vet" wouldn't be known even if his brother was "Carson-Jet", I'm pissin on XL4REAL and leavin his head "Wet" merking this hoe is 1 thing i do not "Regret"//

My Flows are ill and "Preventless" my lines are always "Relentless", You so wack you come out "Progress-less" this is the easiest battle i've ever done i'm killin you "Regretless"//
Your lines so weak they left me "Un-Provoked" i seen it and it was so wack I "Almost-Choked", You got Temporary blindness like you got "Poked" battlin me i'll kill you to where you roll over and "Croak"//
This Right here is my "Last Line" merking your punk ass with my "Last Rhyme", Hopefully we neva battle again cuz this win from you is First and "Last Time" definitly Merking you is my "Last Crime"//

damn nice drop by both of ya

Flow:Mortality
Wordplay:tie
Vocab:Xl
Punches:Mortality
Structure/Complexity:Xl

in my opinion the overall is a tie n ima leave it at that,



...resp...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73103
vote here honestly i will return all honest favors

hit this up first then ill vote here

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=72215

Uppin this for votes, its a dam good battle so vote it up.....either way but fairly, much respect shadow.

UPPIN
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DROP YA LINKS AFTER AND DONT FORGET TO POLL.....
p.s. FCUK ALL YOU ALL THAT DROP YA LINKS AND SAY VOTE HERE THEN I'LL VOTE!!!!
DROP YA VOTES THEN WE WILL HIT YA BACK THATS THE RULES AND YOU KNOW IT.....NO D/R HERE..............
good verse mortality close battle son

Uppin this for votes, its a dam good battle so vote it up.....either way but fairly, much respect shadow.

UPPIN
UPPIN
UPPIN
DROP YA LINKS AFTER AND DONT FORGET TO POLL.....

this one was close, but the better punches came from XL

"Why you comin to me for an X-plan-ation of how to beat vets real quick and be real patient?
Cuz im the one who gives you loosin sensations like when you dont cum good after vigarous masturbation."

that shit was funny

hit my battle up
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=72836

i gotta go with xl4 on this one.
Good shit from both of ya, but i was feelin' xl4's verse more.
I think he won it with punches.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=72921

peace
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Uppin this for votes, its a dam good battle so vote it up.....either way but fairly, much respect shadow.

UPPIN
UPPIN
UPPIN
DROP YA LINKS AFTER AND DONT FORGET TO POLL.....

i agree it was a tie but im gonna go wit mortality
wit just a lil better wordplay