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09-24-03, 01:32 PM | #1 | ||||
Eddy.
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Wishin i was blinded,hear no evil speak no evil
IP: FF40 570D
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Chorus I Can 'Hear' No Evil, Sound Is Silence... I Wished I Coulnd 'See' No Evil, My Vision Is Blindness... I Can 'Speak' No Evil, Just A Quite Sound... But Evil And Purity, makes The World Go Round.. ThugzDoCry Wishin I was Blind I Dont Like Handicaps', but if i could choose, i wished i was blind to all the evil surroundin me, the pressure,so highley manufactured,by stress,and all things stoppin me from being free. Multiple options,and choosin is the,key takes me every time a step closer to,my goal is it destiny?, or is it just a dream,wich in im trapped,and cant get out stuck with every time the same immage'ery. Purely?,or perferctionated is that the key,to wordwide satisfaction,or is it just the acception, of differences thats involving people,in every aspect,regardless, to religion' race,who decides,whats real perfection?. Blind i want to be for the hate,that people are sendin to one and others who arent the same like them, thinkin they more as a human bein,becuz the got some talent,or thinkin they are the higher race, its a discrage,there actually,people who supportin,that thoughts of irrational thinking. Goverments,corrupted were are we going if we coulnt even trust,the sytem in wich we livin?, can we expect,a bad counter,to everything good we try to accomplish,and in what we givin?. Were's the repect?,can we build that up?,again?or is there somthing that must happen before, we really could form one community,of humans,in peace is there still hope,or is it gone,and never to be restored ne more. Bring back salvation,all of us united,as one,fightin side by side, not to destroy,but to heal,every aspect of a kind, Its funny,i really dont like handicaps,but if had to make a decission, yes i would say i rather be blind. Rhythmic tendecies Chorus I Can 'Hear' No Evil, Sound Is Silence... I Wished I Coulnd 'See' No Evil, My Vision Is Blindness... I Can 'Speak' No Evil, Just A Quite Sound... But Evil And Purity, makes The World Go Round.. Vice Versa Hear no Evil I wasnt bless with the gift to see..Do not know how it could be.. Yet, ritually..I keep listening, to my ears as they hit the breeze.. With the need..For a lost sense, i often, kept with dim lights.. But this might..Never occur, but thankful ive had this 'insight'.. Since I..Can hear noise, smell the fragrance, yet guess the vision.. Then in livin..I had 'sided' with hope, and was 'left of wishin'.. In depth precision..This moment, it was serene as the sea.. I dreamed it to be..The way it sounds, i seem its at peace.. Then something happened..The calm, couldnt leave it at ease.. Loud explosions in the air..Then i heard screams in the breeze.. I imagined the fireworks in the sky..Like colors, lurk in my eye.. Undisturbed are the cries..I heard, some distant words come on by.. *Watch Out*!..Probably some parents there, alerting they kids.. Just out having a great time..When nothing worse could exist.. Rhythmic tendecies Chorus I Can 'Hear' No Evil, Sound Is Silence... I Wished I Coulnd 'See' No Evil, My Vision Is Blindness... I Can 'Speak' No Evil, Just A Quite Sound... But Evil And Purity, makes The World Go Round.. Pot1ent Speak No Evil... Always more than one factor to be a contractor of peace Speakin evil into minds is breakin dimes stature to treat Beauty of youth is dicease, just young cussing rebels Turning the decibals up while listening at rock festivals Everything sexual/hetrasexual and gangsta surround us Anguishers impounds us so then we never down to trust Now just clowns bust nothings a plus but found evil Unity of communication has complications cuz of feebles Thats the reason of all hate lets make it not happen Now we don't have to live with rapped wool around childs ears. Rhythmic tendecies Chorus I Can 'Hear' No Evil, Sound Is Silence... I Wished I Coulnd 'See' No Evil, My Vision Is Blindness... I Can 'Speak' No Evil, Just A Quite Sound... But Evil And Purity, makes The World Go Round..
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09-24-03, 01:45 PM | #2 | ||||||
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For y'all...Thugz IS blind...i told him not to post that key
But anyway...this was a real tight collab Up |
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09-24-03, 03:45 PM | #3 | |||||||
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this shit was tight as hell...................every1 did a crazy job on this jawn............and thugz u ARE blind?.........that's a shame....i feel for you.........
the chorus was hot, went well wit tha peice......great collab tho....very interesting topic.......and everyone's views frm each side was an interesting way to do this.......great topic to touch tho, dont think i've seen this before.........GREAT JOB, PROPS TO ALL!............ |
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09-24-03, 05:39 PM | #4 | ||||
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This is was good peice i thought, the chorus was good and it flowed well i thought, nice topic, the verses flowed good, it was good overall i thought, very good, good ready too i thought, Keep Dropping.
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09-24-03, 06:42 PM | #5 | ||||
Eddy.
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He thinkin me blind lol^^
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09-24-03, 06:48 PM | #6 | |||||||
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Decent drop...
Some of the cats had some flow troubles.... Decent vocab... Could be better however... Peep: Huh? ft Chrit |
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09-25-03, 08:03 AM | #7 | ||||
Eddy.
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Back feed ^^
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09-26-03, 10:01 AM | #8 | ||||
Eddy.
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IP: FF40 570D
ZZZzzz time to wake
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09-26-03, 10:18 AM | #9 | |||||||
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that was tight as hell man...the wordplay was phonominal..the aspect was nuts..i loved the chorus it was ill... every verse seemed to come goood...i was really feelin that drop...keep it up man..1
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09-26-03, 12:29 PM | #10 | ||||
Eddy.
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09-26-03, 07:29 PM | #11 | |||||||
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Wow,
This was decent.The chrous was good and deep.Vocab was good,liked the flow.Overall it was a nice piece very deep and touching. 1 |
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09-28-03, 06:49 AM | #12 | ||||
Eddy.
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Up ^^
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09-28-03, 06:59 AM | #13 | |||||||
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That was deep, I loved the way you opened it up "I Don't Like Handicaps', but if I could choose, i wished i was blind to all the evil surroundin me" The flow was nice, the hook is catchy, good wordplay, well structured. The theme was excellent. Good collab.
Now may I go back to sleep? lol zzzZZZzzz
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09-28-03, 07:11 AM | #14 | ||||
Eddy.
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Lol, ^^^
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09-30-03, 06:04 AM | #15 | |||||
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