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Old 08-11-03, 08:19 PM   #1
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Bmuse - The Start ( Verse The First)

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savor the moment, because in a few seconds ill own it
locked in my sights to ignite all of hip hops proponents

My style I stole it from a punk kid with a fro
Took rap as my foray so here’s my alter ego

steadily moving so I’m loosing any chance of looking back
drudging over this broken land only slowing to avoid the cracks

holding off oppressing attacks as sight suffers from facts
I am my own worst enemy, only i can combust and collapse

Sometimes i feel trapped, My words are confined to determined lines
Beings pined down for petty crimes riding the beat with broken rhymes

but times have changed, I’ve rearranged the situation
annexed my soul from my body to create an entire nation

The birth of creation, all I have is determination
Fixed in with this translation of anti mainstream affiliation

I’m not holding off the invasion, I’m undermining with perfect timing
Fighting it off with all I have to corrode the silver lining

So I start the climbing feeling the pressure riding my back
Going as fast as I can but being pulled back by the slack

Jumping the track, I’ve derailed my self from the common man
Taking each opportunity as a chance to advance my stand

I may come from a Land that that stands idly blind
So ill speak as loud as I can keeping the message on rewind

And maybe ill find some good in this fight to show the light
But it will take a lot of time to replace the wrong with the right

NOW IN AUDIO! BMUSE - THE START (VERSE THE FIRST)
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Old 08-11-03, 10:24 PM   #2
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zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Old 08-11-03, 10:32 PM   #3
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YO YOUR WORDPLAY AND STYLE IS TIGHT .
WORDPLAY WAS THERE
SUBJECT WAS THERE
TOPIC WAS RANU THROUGH AND YOU SHOW ELIVATEION THROUGHOUT THE WHOLE THIG
THAT WAS TIGHHT UPPIN FOR YOU AND RETURN THE FAVOR
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Old 08-12-03, 04:07 AM   #4
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someone told me this had nothing to do with hip hop!
wtf
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Old 08-12-03, 06:10 AM   #5
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FINALLY SOMETHING NEW!!!!! most open mics tend to stay stuck on played topics this one did not. (Prophiit stands and applauds). The entire thing was dope from structure to rhyme scheme to lyrics everything. UPPIN for you!!!!
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Old 08-12-03, 06:18 AM   #6
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YEA UPIN FOR ME
Thanks bro
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Old 08-12-03, 06:20 AM   #7
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FINALLY SOMETHING NEW!!!!! most open mics tend to stay stuck on played topics this one did not. (Prophiit stands and applauds). The entire thing was dope from structure to rhyme scheme to lyrics everything. UPPIN for you!!!!



did u peep the audio?
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Old 08-12-03, 06:00 PM   #8
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Old 08-14-03, 05:34 AM   #9
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one last up
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