Check In: Tuesday.

Verses: Thursday.

Alright, The Rules...

16-48 Line Limit...

No Bullshit...

Topic: If I Was..

checkin in, glad this ish finally got up and runnin, good luck playboy, ...............................peace, 1

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"I'm stuck with...what i'm Stuck Wit, cause i don't Suck Dick" - Jadakiss

Corruption:
If I-was-rich, I would definitely Drive-a-Six/
I couldn’t Deny-this-Ish, but I would know more “Peeps”, than a Guy-with-“Chicks”/
Pocket change, would easily Supply-sum-Bricks/
So much power and authority, I could Deny-tha-Crips/
I’m-so-Slick, it wouldn’t even be Halloween and I could still be Sly-with-“Tricks”/
Constantly supplied with Dimes-ta-Hit and participatin’ in Crimes-for-“Kicks”/
It would be great, “Everybody” would “Pay” attention to tha Rhymes-I-Spit/
Hold your breath and pinch your nose, cause I’m-tha-Shit/
Ladies would actually fight for a Chance-ta-See-Me/
Women constantly askin for a ryde in my Lamborghini/
Gettin’ more pussy than Larry Flynt, “Damn-its-Easy”/
Ladies glance at my “Wad”(cash) and whisper “this Man-is-Dreamy”/

Blessing:
Give to my church; I could easily Tithe-with-Jewels/
Take my lil bro off tha streets and send him to Private-Skool/
Donate to cherity and leave tha homeless Supplied-with-Food/
Endless possibilities, who knew all of tha good things one Lyfe-could-Do/
Endless amounts of time to Drop-a-Verse/…save a nation……or Unlock-a-Curse/
My mom would no longa need her Job-…that-“Works”/
And just so she out-Survives-her-Job/, I’ll give her a cool “Mill” and a Viper…Dodge/
Incredibly happy that I’m-Alive/ constantly readin’ tha bible, find Time-for-God/
Travel tha Globe, turn Gravel to Road, by “Paving” a way for Missionary’s/
Spread tha word like “wild fire” and hopefully…Envision-Mary/
Last Solution/, control and contain all of Rap’s-Pollution/
Quickly destroy commercial rap for a Fast-Conclusion/

If lyfe was a game, Lessons-would-be-Instructions/
Here’s a Question-worth-Discussion: what outweighs tha otha, Blessin’s-or-Corruption?/


peace, 1
punk ass no showin

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"I'm stuck with...what i'm Stuck Wit, cause i don't Suck Dick" - Jadakiss

why you gotta no show, thats crunked, well whateva....i'm advancin, hopefully kats peep my verse anyways, peace, 1

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"I'm stuck with...what i'm Stuck Wit, cause i don't Suck Dick" - Jadakiss

You had a nice verse. But for topicals there is really no point to quote. Also don't stretch out the lines, it messes up the flow and makes it alot more complicated to read. No beef, just pointing stuff out to you.

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thanx bro, i might consida changin that, but my storytellin record is gonna be 4-0 afta this, so my ish is still workin, peace, 1

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"I'm stuck with...what i'm Stuck Wit, cause i don't Suck Dick" - Jadakiss

lyft it for responses......................................... .................................................. .., peace, 1

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"I'm stuck with...what i'm Stuck Wit, cause i don't Suck Dick" - Jadakiss