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Topic: Lonely Spirit.

in..........never battled av in a topical........good luck home biscuit...
...........goin for the 100 characters........................................ ..........

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Will insert verse later...




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*steps in the booth...*


Iight... Av's ready... let's go...


*beat starts... (Just don't stop... Just Blaze...)*


let's begin...


ok...

recall the last days of my life and the times... that I...
felt so alone I cried... it's always dusk... dust gets me by...
why do blacks... latino's end in prison... the mission just stops,
blocks crack... pistols win... listen... friends pass... just watch...
and now... I'm standin alone... hear the wind's whistles,
under rocks... tanks are throne... and Cuba has missles...
Kobe made decisions... outkast...
out last... any back lash... I thrash at empty children's rooms missin...
back at A now... the alphabet and seasame street lied,
I tried... to dye the stained t shirts of my life with dry eyes twice...
come around the bend of my wife's elbow... settle wrong ones,
from Moses to President... nimwits in dimlit light follow Bronson metals...
get it..? weight based on the pinciples of our principals,
fat pockets... and slim ass monopolize in the eyes of criminals... GET IT..!?
fucked in fetal positions... waters blood... settin rivers on fire again,
nobody invited me in... father's love is leviathan's twin...


And I know what you been waitin for...
for me to step off... and up the scale... is the loneliest soul...
and I know what you been waitin on...
I can't see my own face in the flesh... the loneliest soul...
And I know what you been waitin for...
for me to step off... and up the scale... is the loneliest soul...
and I know what you been waitin on...
I can't see my own face in the flesh... the loneliest soul...


Dios gracias... para esta dos minutos,
regardless... the heartless... left in any battle scar... you choose...
flyin through clouds... he's sightless...
bribes blind those in plain clothes... and the sayin goes... writers right... and write less...
blame thrown at you... flame thrown at you,
expect respect to the game... when the rains throne at you...
if everyone has guns... where the fuck are all the thugs..?,
if for fun we all killers... where the fuck are all the punks..?
What could you call this reality... solitude, no luck and sterile,
if israel 4 pounds cocked for gauges... where's the truth in the lock of the barrels..?
when did the grieving fued... believing in dollars for food,
snipers posted... souls released... 28 hour evening news...
count down to revelation... heart is impatient,
especially when segregation has me stuck on the top page... feel it..?
mouthed now of elevation... got the crowd waitin,
the last emcee of the nation... has stepped to the stage... Get it..?

walkin on a New York building rooftop at night.....


...rain dropping.....



.....looks up to the sky......



.....i been thru so much......no one feels my pain.........i'm so
alone..............



FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK!!




yo...yo...


i'm alone...abandoned....born in this world forsaken by God
my spirit is plane...twisted insane..like the '11th' members of Jihad
focused on being a mod....is the excitement of my life...
FUCK MY WIFE!!...hit that kick that bitch for pullin a knife
now she gone....vanished...screamin 'andelay!'..well fuck spanish
took my seeds.....but being addicted to weed helps me manage
so i thought.i assumed,evicted from my house,nowrent out a room
readin dyslexic in my 'mood' swing made me realize my 'doom'
been hated and discriminated......possessed and oppressed
suicidal thoughts & heroin shots..still was in pain & depressed
stress?!...ha ha...these muthaphuckas don't even know the word
only eyes from the Lord..saw me seekinspirits from a Quioja board
cursed wit a lonely spirit,Jesus ain't hearin it....my prayers that is..
if he did...then why'd my kids,get tookin like the way that they did
flipped the coin on my inner child..he fell deep in the abyss
on coke...stay broke,wit cottonmouth i'm forced to drinkin my piss
is this a diss on myself?...or is this the truth that i'm feedin?...
truth is i'm sweatin from ventin this anger thats heatin!..


walks towards the ledge and stands on it......looks down..

Yes!...adrenanline rush from gazing into the faces of death
no fear in my heart...my world fell apart..and mixed it wit meth
i'm wastin my breath...wastin away..even told i'ma waste of space
i just wanna fly...like Lenny Kravitz...and forget of this place
what am i doing?!.....can't jump....cuz my kids still got a father
gotta rethink....gotta retract...gotta man up and not even bother
i'm not takin this plunge..takin this 'Fall'..but turnin over a leaf
start from the beginnin....repay my lendings...put an end to beef..




THUD!!!



AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!






......bitch owed me 50 dollars.....LONELY SPIRITed crazy nigga.....
out here rappin in the rain and shit........now he a dead muthafuck




ghost

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i was wondering if we could get votes on this if thats possible in
any way,.....so i guess consider this an 'uppin'............blah..........

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Avalon:This was a very very interesting drop. It focused more on wordplay and flow than 13ths did, but it began losing steam at the end.It stayed close to topic and that helped out alot 8/10

13th Disciple: This piece was pretty good. I liked the story and everything, it kept me interested. A very good Drop and it had some good vocabulary. The flow was good as well.8.5/10

vote-13th Disciple

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