YO YO YO
yo if i spit each rhyme like it was processed-
from my last breath-
then that would make the parralel lines-i write flatlines-
equal to death-
in 30 sentences ,30 micro seconds, 30 obituararies are written-from weapons called bar spitten
-if you srurvived listenen -then you just a retard liven-
nothing else would compute your brain waves would slip-
from my compact disc-
loaded to your minds hardrive my virus shutdowns you memory chip-
aint it ubsurd, i just made my words, rap but took them out of context-you should be disturbed-
but you still aint as preterbed as i am when you take 90 percent of my consepts-out of context-
the other ten percent WERN'T EVEN DECENT-
just some substance-
my attempts to prove you only respond to nonsence-
igonrance in constance-
is this what hip hop has to instore for me?whats the point to feed-myslef for being lyrically hungry if when i drop a joint you'd think it was weed-then i write till my nose bleed-
so a bunch of nameless ignoramous-cats that only do raps in caps to be famous-tell me- what they cant even be-
you a mochary-
it aint all good-if you really all hood-
then rep it like you should-not like you would-
i use my name in rhymes tatttooed to my spine so atleast i represent being misunderstood (makeng know centz)
so you cant say that i~m fake-unless you I_M_ the jake-
when i STEEL on you using the internet-
define the crime as punchlines twisted to a retrospect-
so when i claim ILL MURDER YOU IN A RHYME it's a realistic-
cause you to freat- cause its no threat-
More advanced then minor idiot technology-
fools who merge binary tools and astronomy-
convincen their convictions god is mythology-
dumbassess that don’t realize the meaning of philosophy-
clone man to develop cybernetic atrosity’s=
hypocrisy is the first key to blasphemy-
so if im MAKENG KNOW CENTZ the oddity-
then you have a degree in idiotisy-
i study gynecology-dentistry and proctology-
to snag those foes and they calvary-
rip them through they body cavity-
and prostetic parts-spit from the heart-
the rap patoriarch and monorch-
Rip rap antonyms with acronymns-
synonyms with that are based of homonyms-
extrication of words from content like joint seperation in limbs-
with the trajectory from my breath to blow you out your timbs-

uppin for feed back\

it was all right kid........keep the same storyline.....meta's and analogies are used to prove points.........keep elevating....

huh

get a lyrical thermometer cause this shit is hot!! damn bud, to many lines that i liked to quote, i grabbed a few, but shit son, this was ill as fuck, vocab was definately the grabber, and your type of flow, that only you have is just off the hook, wordplay, everything kid, keep it up

is this what hip hop has to instore for me?whats the point to feed-myslef for being lyrically hungry if when i drop a joint you'd think it was weed-then i write till my nose bleed
^^that was sick

when i STEEL on you using the internet-
define the crime as punchlines twisted to a retrospect-
so when i claim ILL MURDER YOU IN A RHYME it's a realistic-
cause to freat cause its no threat-
^^that was sicker

More advanced then minor idiot technology-
fools who merge binary tools and astronomy-
convincen their convictions god is mythology-
dumbassess that don’t realize the meaning of philosophy-
clone man to develop cybernetic atrosity’s
^^sick

its like the whole way through it was gettin sicker and sicker, damn, i think another collabo gonna have to happen soon, maybe some of ur fire will catch onto me!!

Wurd your skill is tite, like to see you hit on a in-depth topic..there normally your best reads...this was hot tho, just felt this as usin your skillz on what you was feltin at the time...Word get at me with when the colabs gonna be dropped...hOlla

hit my latest drop up if you got time....

I would give a more indepth reply but i don't feel as if you spent much time on this because it has no set topic for me to notice..I'd really like to see you go on a realistic topic instead of just battle lyrics..I seen a few lines in there that was eye catching tho so don't feel discouraged..


nothing else would compute your brain waves would slip-
from my compact disc-
loaded to your minds hardrive my virus shutdowns you memory chip-

The computer anaoligies used here i found creative..Nice set of lines i think..


use my name in rhymes tatttooed to my spine so atleast i represent being misunderstood

That's so stretched man..But the concept dealing from "KNOW CENTS" is dope...

More advanced then minor idiot technology-
fools who merge binary tools and astronomy-
convincen their convictions god is mythology-
dumbassess that don’t realize the meaning of philosophy-


That was good as well..Nice content..Some parts had little or no meaning to me but as a whole it fit well..

That's really all i felt was worth quoting..I find it hard to give positive feedback to mixed pieces..Meaning it's battle rap with a deeper outlook but none the less a battle rap..So as far as elevation i can't tell you Anything that i havn't already..

Keep it up tho..Elevation is present..

1ne

heres my 2 cents, take it how you want

i generally liked it but im a stickler for staying on topic. I liked the computer anaolgies, then i LOVED the section about getting respect (i think thats what you were trying to say). after that it was still good but like i said, i need consitency in a theme. dont get me wrong, this is 20x better than what i can do but just saying, pick a topic and stick to it. other than that it was real good