Poppa Bizzle

this story is lost, so not just the dumb are askin'..
what is the plot?, and what is gonna happen?..
i make up lines, that lead straight to a plot twist..
knowledge comes with time, your not able to stop this..
i keep you guessin', wonder the main purpose..
...but its a mess underneath it's plain worthless..
there are no answers and, hardley questions..
just wait til the end, like party refreshments..
so what is the logic, cuz the hoax has spoken right? ..
this rap has no topic...just like most open mics..


Baron Mynd

Behold, a tale of suspense where the entire worlds a suspect
For every Endured soul Pawned or Sold beneath the sun set.
A tongue blessed w/ free speech, yet never heard or spoken
Just silently sits, waiting for movies refreshment bars to open.
Harsh emotion's Potraid & through life's Theatre Of Dreams,
I feel the need too own a 30 Day Trial of this Feared Reality.
Edge of seat becomes Rule of Thumb as we Pen Duel some
and living honest is bleeding promise of what you've become,
an Omen of Evolution that'll remain plain Stuck In The Music
our fates chooses cause u lost the plot in a state of confusion.
& what ur facing is losing, the crowd applaudes & its blatant
Its Now Curtains for me, im a dying man, but i had u hangin. .

In Suspense.

tight, sick topic 'a topic about a topic.' kinda felt like ya attacking people who spit da same ol' shit, nice i like it

It's aight, kinda new age Das Efx

Sci-Pher Is Dope : )

THIS WAS DONE EXQUISETLY I FELT IN

Whats With The One Line Replies?

WELL OKAY
I WLL GET INDEPT

this story is lost, so not just the dumb are askin'..
what is the plot?, and what is gonna happen?..

GREAT INTRO LINE THE THOUGHT PROCESS OF WRITTERS BLOCK AND THE FIRST QUESTION WHEN YOU WRITE A TRACK THATS ASKED.

THE OPEN MICS LINE WAS PERFECTLY USED AND BY FAR ONE OF MY FAVORITES ON THIS BOARD

Edge of seat becomes Rule of Thumb as we Pen Duel some
and living honest is bleeding promise of what you've become,

WONDERFUL WORDPLAY THERE AND CONCEPT WAS DELIVERED EXACT

what ur facing is losing, the crowd applaudes & its blatant
Its Now Curtains for me, im a dying man, but i had u hangin.

TIGHT BUT I LOST THE RHYME SCHEME HERE THOUGH

OVER ALL 8/10 RATING

Heh, Me And Poppa Are From England, So Blatant / Hangin' Rhymes In Our Accent.

Thanks For The Response Though : )

Well indeed, it was a different piece. No doubt about that. It was a decent piece. Poppa's verse seemed a little more simplistic then Cam's but the Open Mics line was a good one, used at the right time. Cam's verse is what you would expect it to be, a nice verse, but still not your best.

an Omen of Evolution that'll remain plain Stuck In The Music
our fates chooses cause u lost the plot in a state of confusion.
^^This was a creative line. This piece was pretty good, but it doesn't build up the Suspense, though it holds truth that most open mics are repetitive, like the topics are either about love, attempting to write deep verses, or regular keystyles. Some are worse but those shouldn't be mentioned. Overall this was a good drop. Good shit. Peep my verse SS: Frightful Desire

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Yup, I'll Reply In A Min Bro. .

Blah At You Sleepers. .

Well gotta show love to fellow U.K Head's

Dope Stuff,
The originalty was great,
the topic, was well.....
mmmmm........mmmmm.......what was it?
a great medium to think of that topic
many, many props

Pz..

(Nice Username Lmfao)

^ The Topic Was Basically -

We Wont Give The Piece A Topic, Then The Readers Will Be Held In Suspense Not Knowing If They Caught The Topic Or Not!

We Seem To Of Pulled It Off. Poppa Summed It Up Nicely W/ This:

this story is lost, so not just the dumb are askin'..
what is the plot?, and what is gonna happen?..

^ Gyeah!

nice drop...i liked the flow the word play it was great 8/10

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