This is freestyling, i'm bored......:

i came from the streets, from the beats i was raised.
i came with the heat, so i got instant praise...
and with my displays.... i showed the way's
and look at this shit today, It's settin off a craze,

From the street's viscious heat amongst violent sway's
Grazed in battle, i still won, glazed with Appraise,
Cleverer than c.i.a's, N.r.a's set Ablaze,
I'm cleanin this site in extravegent way's
Killa Exticnt's the crew, set in my way's
Shit Shift's and sway's just like milo malaise,
So show some respect for your hero of the day,
it's Add Giftin the blessed, before they hit genital phase,
Hotter Than Pinochets Dossier's,
I'm hittin the highlife, No Hit No Praise
And when i touch, shit decay's, convey's then de-fray's
My Fluxtuation so swift, your shourded in haze,
Your only shoulder to cry on, is a teddy these day's
Re-phrase what you said, all it does is spray,
ADD's Kickin **** with the melodic phrase,
and all you can do is copy and paste...
The Rack's been placed,
your the last on the list..........
Any chance of your win....is like,
Gorilla's in the mist........
Fuck risk, i'll hit you in the face....
so the clack can say it's twist...
this is it, one flick of the wrist, and that's it..........
You aint shit.............

That's it.

FIRST LET ME ENDORSE MY PYRIMIDS PF WAR -FEST SKIDDLEZ AND NOE BRAINER ID APPRECIATE FEED BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


i came from the streets, from the beats i was raised.
i came with the heat, so i got instant praise...
and with my displays.... i showed the way's
and look at this shit today, It's settin off a craze,

GREAT INTRO ESPECIELLY SEPERATEN IT FROM THE VERSE AND IT CARRIES ITS OWN AUTHENTICITY FOR FREESTYLEN

USEN STREET TACT TO APPLY TO RAP METAHORICALLY IMPRESSIVE CONCEPT....HARD TO SUCCESSFULLY PULL WELL DONE.
I FELT IT AND LIKED INDEED CANT REALLY COMPLAIN ON IT

damn, this shit was pretty ill......nice multies throughout........nice intro......nice ending.......this shit was nice.........i enjoyed reading it and look forward to reading more from you....stay up....P C Z

Up a Rooney

nice flow, had a good sence, i enjoyed the intro it was hot, an the verse was ill to no doubt the piece was great 1

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461