tha rhyme comes 1ce to 2 guys at half-past 3/
at 4, 5 more guyz seem to try to be an MC/
6 shotz out-a glock, leaves still one breathin/
so i use a 7-foot javilin and knock 8 of his teeth in/
9 soilders come after me for commitin murder/
to try to give me 10 years for each, that's fifty lost when i could eat burgers/
now i got 9 inmates who want my "slop"/
there seems to be 8 dayz in a week and that tha weeks don't stop/
my family lost a thug, now they live like anotha 7th heaven/
6 members under one roof, only a couple my breathren/
5 years left til i'm out, 4 of my family rests peacefully/
3 more were added though, 2 r still babies/
and that justs leaves me as tha lost 1/
a thug wit 0 friends cause he lived by tha gun/

nothin special, not expectin too much positive feedback but some feedback anywayz...

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ill shits, if i quoted something id be repeating the whole thing. sick how u went to 10 an back.

"6 shotz out-a glock, leaves still one breathin/
so i use a 7-foot javilin and knock 8 of his teeth in/"

that line had me laghn, it all came together real good. i bet it would be a tight audio.

Nice drop. Creative and good solid ending.
Nice work!!!!!!!!!!

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^ agreed this is the best line in the verse.....dope concept and well done, the flow was on point for the most part the vocab was basic but you managed to tell a story using the concept and not just spouting nonsensical crap to make the concept work 8/10 very good piece!!!!!!!!!!!