10 Lines.
No DickRyder Votes.
You Drop First.

Good Luck.

WIT ME DISSING U DOGG IT BURNS TO YA HEART HOTTER THAN FIRE.
HOTTER THAN THAT WIZARDS DRESS THAT THEY PUT ON MARIAH.
IM A SHOOT YOU IN APRIL SO YA ASS CANT SEE MAY.
DONT GET MAD CAUSE U THE GAY CLUBS FAVORITE DJ .
U DONT CARRY GUNS SO AINT NUTHIN WITH U AND CLAPPIN.
LIKE BATTLING ME IT MEANS NUTHIN LIKE U AND RAPPIN.
U AINT TWISTA WHEN U FLOW U DONT RYHME WITH PRECISION.
IM A K.O. YA ASS OUT NO SPLIT DECISIONS.
YA BREATH PROBALY SMELL LIKE SHIT, DOGG WHAT THE HELL IS U DRINKING.
ARE U DRUNK OR SOMETHING BATTLING ME WHAT THE HELL IS U THINKIN.

hoLLA ITS YA BOY LIVE AND DIRECT

^whats with the all caps?

anyways it was alright for a newbie (if your one which i doubt) but some of those topics ( a lot of them) is played out

i'll come back when other dude spits

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Later DanE
Word-Ness
I have a website

YoungStreetz Was Left In The Corner Wen Skill Was Handed Out
This Wins Mine You Should Have Atleat Had Ur Verse Planned Out
I'm Spittin Fresh Shit As If PepperMints Laced My Vocal Cords
You Spit Wooden, I Rip And Break Your Style Coz Your Board
My Verse Loaded And Strapped, Cats Won't Consider Bland Tales
Ur Plans Failed...Streetz An Emcee? All He Delivers Is My Fan Mail
It's Man's Grail, Little Boys Get Fucked And Ur Just A Boisterous Slut
Spittin Out Dry Words, Sounds Like Ur Throat Needs Moistining Up
Go Look At Some Other Battles And Learn To Pick Out Ur Shit
So Make Ur Attempt At This 'Feat'... U'll Just Get A Kick Out Of It.

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Both were pretty whack but if i would have to say it would be the lite guy

yeah so both y'all elevate

and battle me because im bored

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Later DanE
Word-Ness
I have a website

YO YO WE NEED SOME VOTES SO HELP OUT B AND VOTE UP SO WE CAN END THIS SHIT HOLLA AT YA BOY IM BACK LIKE I JUST LEFT SOMETHIN

YoungStreetz Was Left In The Corner Wen Skill Was Handed Out
This Wins Mine You Should Have Atleat Had Ur Verse Planned Out
I'm Spittin Fresh Shit As If PepperMints Laced My Vocal Cords
You Spit Wooden, I Rip And Break Your Style Coz Your Board
My Verse Loaded And Strapped, Cats Won't Consider Bland Tales
Ur Plans Failed...Streetz An Emcee? All He Delivers Is My Fan Mail
It's Man's Grail, Little Boys Get Fucked And Ur Just A Boisterous Slut
Spittin Out Dry Words, Sounds Like Ur Throat Needs Moistining Up
Go Look At Some Other Battles And Learn To Pick Out Ur Shit
So Make Ur Attempt At This 'Feat'... U'll Just Get A Kick Out Of It.

Pretty Basic....Good punches


WIT ME DISSING U DOGG IT BURNS TO YA HEART HOTTER THAN FIRE.
HOTTER THAN THAT WIZARDS DRESS THAT THEY PUT ON MARIAH.
IM A SHOOT YOU IN APRIL SO YA ASS CANT SEE MAY.
DONT GET MAD CAUSE U THE GAY CLUBS FAVORITE DJ .
U DONT CARRY GUNS SO AINT NUTHIN WITH U AND CLAPPIN.
LIKE BATTLING ME IT MEANS NUTHIN LIKE U AND RAPPIN.
U AINT TWISTA WHEN U FLOW U DONT RYHME WITH PRECISION.
IM A K.O. YA ASS OUT NO SPLIT DECISIONS.
YA BREATH PROBALY SMELL LIKE SHIT, DOGG WHAT THE HELL IS U DRINKING.
ARE U DRUNK OR SOMETHING BATTLING ME WHAT THE HELL IS U THINKIN.
You Obviously Need Help

Multis=N
Punches=N
Worldplay=Y
Creativty=N
Personal =Niether
Vt=N

Yo abviously

THis wus one sided wit the Punches N creativeness also N

So my vote is N

Cant poll vote yet


hit this battle up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=75040

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Vote N lit Better punches........structure and flow, both need elevation.........fo real.......but keep ya head up.............better overall vote= N Lit

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Fuck you

word up n lit takes this wiv better punches,good verse i liked it. hit this up people
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=75074

OK...3-0 My Way.
Uppin For Final Votes.
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Young had...
completely played...
concepts...
no attempt at...
clever punches...

to simplistic...

N came better...
still not...
great...

but good...
enough..

both need...
elevation...

vote.. N LitEnd...

What?...

Thanx...Upping For The Final Vote...
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Yo i aint votin on no more battles till peeps start votin on mine,,,,,,,,,,,,,, so idf you want me to bote you know what to do...


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=75456
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=75326