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Old 08-25-03, 04:01 AM   #1
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Amend vs Black & White- topical

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my first topical.
tell me if i suck after lol.
good luck.
you make the topic once you see this. watever you want it to be is fine with me.
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Old 08-25-03, 04:09 AM   #2
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Checkin In
Your First? hmmmm
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Old 08-25-03, 04:09 AM   #3
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topic...everlasting....
u can drop whenever amend tomorrow tonight...
ima try my best and this is my first time so im not sure how long itll take me. . so take ya time drop after me if u want...
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Old 08-25-03, 04:58 AM   #4
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this is my first time ever on topical. dont be too hard on me if it sucks. just say it sucks. i wrote it in first person for a lot of it. some references are closely related to reasons why eternal life are good and bad....u figure it out. .....

if i could just have it. .

immortal life, extendin time & never leavin friends behind
lendin souls a gentle mind & thinkin of ways to spend the time
but maybe the end is fine, to welcome the stairway to heaven. .
but if god was so good would he let kids die at age eleven?
everythings black & white to me death & life if i die tonight. .
would it be worth it to instead have everlasting life?
lifes dedication to findin the fountain of youth spoutin at you &
i think about livin forever long n hard, still dont amount to a clue
fuck it, take a drink from the fountain of youth & regret later. .
turned gods traitor & with one gulp blew deaths detonator
no spectators cuz no one else matters now bein here 4ever. .
wit every endeavor realizin theres no longer now or never
cuz i just killed father time & will forever stay in my prime
fuck it, think for urself. . does it matter what i say in this rhyme?

the after effects. .

bored of my life and nutin 2 do cuz im even here fuckin wit you. .
now wishin id entered the gates and instead centered my hate
. . on eternally time being spent on a wait//
stuck forever wishing to meet all those friends and family that have come and gone. . finally realizing most of the choices i had done were wrong. .//
but its too late now shoulda spent more time reflecting & less on pushing away death & fear of rejection. .//
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Old 08-25-03, 12:04 PM   #5
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Old 08-25-03, 01:45 PM   #6
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lol^
freeposter.
blahblahblahblahblah is that amend?
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Old 08-25-03, 02:37 PM   #7
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No Text is some stupid freeposter who has been freeposting everywhere and soon wi ll be banned nice spit AMEND
 
Old 08-25-03, 02:42 PM   #8
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THAT WAS MY SPIT NOT AMENDS!

MY SPIT I TAKE ALL CREDIT ITS MINE!
SEE THE NAME BLACK & WHITE NEXT TO IT?
THAT MEANS ITS MINE! LOL.
BUT IM SURE HE'LL COME HARD.....
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Old 08-25-03, 02:48 PM   #9
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Dude...

I know ya probably an alter...

But how ya battlin in here with no wins?

Ya need 4 + to be considered elite.

Didn't know you could change ya name and not start again from scratch.
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Old 08-25-03, 02:50 PM   #10
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im an alter of feeble minded.
and i can battle in here since im elite.
ive seen many other kids do it with other names.
was that spit ne good? its my first time.

*dope*
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Old 08-26-03, 12:56 AM   #11
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uppin for amend its been two days.
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Old 08-26-03, 02:49 AM   #12
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Uhh Just to tell you now HE likes to say hes gonna merk you than drop out.. Hes done that twice to JT Knuckles
 
Old 08-26-03, 06:05 AM   #13
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ok. then ill win by default.
if he checks in and dont post i win. so post todat or lose amend.
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