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Old 09-06-03, 12:21 AM   #1
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Mortality

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a trinity of four long seasons of pain,
arrange a fan bassist, erased and insane,
rap about love, while busy lying in the rain,
undergraduate of hip hop, on unfriendly terrain
didn't I pronounce the ph, in the phat?
didn't you know prophets once stood where you sat?
don't I explore the back words, just like the bat?
explain advanced calculus, and all you say is "tru dat!"
a meteor metaphor sliding down to the Earth
Chris may Rock it, but he doesn't know what it's worth
truffle shuffled to death, just shaking the girth
you've been breathing my oxygen since the moment of birth
chopping legs off, create lame word analogies
realities? please, enough sentimentality
fortify the Skye to Sweetam with fatality
happiness? fuck that, here's a lesson in Mortality


yeah, shut up, the bars are all out of wack, but it flows in audio, so fuck right off
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Old 09-06-03, 12:58 AM   #2
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if you made that up its hot no doubt about that.....but tha way its put togeather n the vocab n metas sound like it was from my nigga Canibus cuz i thought i heard a few things in that verse that Canibus might of spit but i might be wrong buy anyway nice verse it was hot
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Old 09-06-03, 01:05 AM   #3
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u had some sick lines bro, nice concept
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Old 09-06-03, 01:42 PM   #4
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if you made that up its hot no doubt about that.....but tha way its put togeather n the vocab n metas sound like it was from my nigga Canibus cuz i thought i heard a few things in that verse that Canibus might of spit but i might be wrong buy anyway nice verse it was hot


don't call me a biter dude lol.
sadly, I've never even heard a canibus track, though he's spose to be dope.
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Old 09-06-03, 01:48 PM   #5
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my bad playboy that peice was hot u got skillz i wasnt callin u a biter i was simply sayin it sounds like a verse from canibus you naa mean the way i said did sound like i was callin u a biter but i aint mean it like that but nice piece tho but i wanna see a longer verse like a song

if u want we can do a calob jus get at me if u want ~1~
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Old 09-06-03, 01:50 PM   #6
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oh n check out my piece i dropped it aint all that good cuz i jus now started ta get back in the game cuz i stopped for a while so i was jus tryin some stuff ta get my writers block off feel me ~1~
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