To much emphasive on materials which leads to greed,
Then rich are found imperial to others that are in need/
They never conscede, hopes never proceed but tearfuls,
From the suffering they have to cope with...it's pitiful/
Wealths like canibals eating people to live with dope,
Some have feasts other hoping just for morsles...its a joke/
Earth bloats with uneqaulitys it may end up just exploding,
Why the divide between us n poverty? Hear them moaning?/
The goverments controlling before are at fault for felonys,
Of billions suffering hoards of pain...now theres no remedy/
Do we trully believe that...lets start over so there is no poor,
Try to exceed happiness of that we perceive n settle all scores/
Why war? we should resolve problems with air we breath,
We do have competition to control but why does death impede/
Are we free? no world leaders just say we have rite to hold,
That in itself is bein a preacher to say what are life entolls/
Laws layed so we don't evolve into something masterful,
We been played and carry onto into a scene disatsterful/
We was born with balls...to control how generatins are trained,
Earths bein strained til one day it's experimenation is contained/

We Failed

nice peice, but can i ask why so many people look at the bad things of this earth? im not saying its whack, im sayin dats sick but alotta people seem depressed lol



nice creativity, comparing cannibilism with poverty and enquality. but i felt ya juices started wearing thin after this, like you switched style. keep droppin bruv

I hear ya about the 'Why do people look at bad aspects of our world'

..well it was something i felt like spittin on it but i was not depressed far from it..but just thinkning of the troubles that the world has...hOlla

oNe

BEAUTY I THINK IS HARDER TO WRITE ABOUTE ......
PO AS EXPECTED YOU LACED THIS TWIN YOU ONLY ADVANCING

thanx

...hOlla

great drop good emotion an word play 8/10

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This was good nice creativty like that guy said good vocab nice flow i liked it but i prefered your other one 8/10 peace..........................................

Thanx for the feedback y'all

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