aight 10 lines
u spit first
no dickrydin
no hate votes
no krew votes

u have half an hour after ur check in

Shit sounds good to me..... I'm checkin' in,
I'll drop my shit soon....... 100 charecters, shit
what tha fuck is up with that shit???

i will bot here if you do me some honest droping here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=76094
peace

Yo, this cat'z style blows, it smellz like phisis / I think this guy is tryin' to make a new animal species /

I am a true playa with all kinds of playz, with eXtreme degrees / My style is so cool that you'd think I drink anti-freeze /

After I defeat ya, please take it like a man and don't start bitchin' please / When tha eXtreme team blows up outside of tha underground, we will be spendin goverment type cheese /

My style is tha bomb, that'z why some people call me eXplosive /
I'm as sick as a cancer patient, you'd swear I was drinkin' medicine doses /

I got passion for this rap game, that'z why I can roc tha mic betta than Freeway / I will leave ya ass delirious ya will only be drivin' in a one way /

Extreme lyricist we have a vision, one day we'll be on top, sorta like a *unit* called *gorilla* / After I kill ya, people will start callin' me tha new best kept secret killa /

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Theres my freestyle, its 12 bars though, fuck it there it is!!!

People please vote honestly,

Franchise Player
eXtreme lyricist
~ 1 ~

prepare to be merked......

feel ya chest concave, when i spit my first wave, my first line conects and send u straight to da grave//1

six feet underz where u'll fall wit out a doubt, u like a hooker after i blew(spit) my load(verse) u booked da fuck out//2

u didnt spit a personal but if u did it wouldnt last, u juss wanna be freeway and fifty hopin they go *gorilla* on ya ass//3

claimin u cant be reached,but as a fly weight u shouldnt be classified, cuz spitten to reel mc'z well make ya record leave u unsatisfied(losing)//4

i load my glocksette(glosette=candy)aim and then u scream *Oh henry!*, u shouldnt have started this beef, shoulda stick to choclates and dairy(cowz make beef and dairy)//5

my metaphores is to much for u like tappin sum ass,ur lyrical pre-mature ejaculation preventz u frum completing this task(task=win)//6

he claimz to be da "franchise playa" and he'z da lyricist extreme, but when im finish hiz franchise record will drop down to 3//7

itz over fast by line 8, like pop up bookz, but u couldnt spit gangsta shit if u coughed up crookz//8

he challenged me to a battle thought he'd try, he worked so hard but didnt spit one dope line//9

claimin he'z "def"("ill") but he'z been beatin wit da "wack" wood stick, if we all had hearing aidz we still wouldnt give a shit//10

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Yo............


K O got this

Wordplay.... Tie
Meti's.... no doubt this was Franchise PLayA
Multi's ...... Ko
punches.... Ko
personals Ko

But yo ...... Franchise PLayA
you got Mad Skillz If ya Just think of tha Punch first then work on tha set up you will Murk Dudes.........

Peace

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this battle was one-sided and weak at the sametime.both emcees had a weak verse but K.O.'s verse was aimed more towards his opponent.Franchise seemed to be jus talkin about himself

vote-K.O.

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if yall could hit this up i'de appreciate it
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=76038

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